|Reviews for The Dawn of War|
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/8
| StoryReigns96 chapter 5 . 3/1
Really, "Hey Demon, leader of this nation, surrounded by bodyguards and a sannin, tell me where your subordinates are so I can kill them. Please."
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
I should love this story but don't pair him up with hinata of all people she is a bloody fangirl she is annoying as hell so not reading it sorry
| ELMO-fAN cLUB MeMbER chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
I'm confused...one second Naruto was easily beating both Sasuke and Sakura by himself, then all of a sudden Sasuke is kicking his ass. Doesn't make sense to me. Naruto got weaker all of a sudden.
| Cockwhore chapter 30 . 6/10/2013
| lelouchthedemon chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
great story so far
| OrionRejects chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Good story. Check 's translator out. They have a Japanese- English one, and a 'dictionary' where you enter an English word, and it tells you how to spell it and stuff.
| Tainted Uchiha chapter 30 . 8/4/2011
your planned re-write of this story sounds like a good idea, would be a shame if you didn't.
| Blackjack Zack chapter 30 . 6/15/2011
I say "yes" do a rewrite, just don't become a slave to what the manga has already done. It's your story, put your own originality and creativity into it.
| Mad-Maximus chapter 30 . 6/14/2011
Do the re-write, this is a great story.
| Kingkakashi chapter 29 . 6/14/2011
I'm actually surprised that you're debating whether to rewrite this story. It's by far your most popular one with readers, as nearly 500 reviews can attest to that. So I ask and say yes, please rewrite this story. It's too good to just die like so many other stories on this site that aren't half as good as this.
| luvShikamaru chapter 30 . 6/13/2011
Sure. I wouldn't mind seeing this rewritten.
| KillamriX88 chapter 30 . 6/11/2011
Boo. This story sucked ass. I can't believe you wrote such crap.
So hurry up and rewrite it and actually do a good job this time, gawd.
And sorry the-d00msday, he's straight. You'll have to find love elsewhere, mate.
| the-d00msday chapter 30 . 6/11/2011
your a fucking faggot. go die
| Impstar chapter 30 . 1/14/2011
A wonderful story. Why on earth have you not continued it? Please, please update again soon.