|Reviews for Book of the Dead|
| bugsymutt chapter 34 . 11/23/2013
I wanted to reread this and I have to say I liked it even more the second time! It would make a great movie, by the way. I love how you included little bits from your "Saving the World" story, such as the incident with the Russian and the fate of LJ's family. Hope you write more soon.
| bugsymutt chapter 35 . 5/11/2013
Just finished! The story took a few unexpected turns, but you wrote it so well that I couldn't wait to keep reading to see what happened in the next chapter. I liked how you carried elements from the beginning of the story throughout... so while I didn't understand certain things at first, they made sense later on. Smart writing. Thank you for posting this story - I look forward to reading your next one!
Oh, and Flint can recite poetry to me any day...
| bugsymutt chapter 12 . 5/9/2013
I just found this story and I've enjoyed making my way through each chapter. Several times throughout I thought about stopping to write a short note, but these two sentences compelled me to take the time to do it: "A more alert sober man would have thought through his actions to their inevitable repercussions. Tonight, Ripcord was not that man." Yikes. I couldn't wait to see what happened. Great story so far, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.
| nejitenfan chapter 35 . 8/21/2012
cant wait to see what you have next
| anhuska chapter 35 . 8/21/2012
E agora... esse capítulo foi magnífico, mas e o resto
| idstealer000 chapter 35 . 8/21/2012
A sequel huh? Sounds like it might be interesting, it would be nice to see there family's or lack of and why.
| mossley chapter 35 . 8/21/2012
So glad to see this finished, and so sad that it's over. Although, thoughts of a sequel makes me smile. :D I really would like to see more on Jaye's hesitation and the reference to Dermot and her grandmother.
I absolutely loved the Nurse Ratched from "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest" references. and that the nurses saw right through Hawk's attempt to cover up those little frat violations.
Waiting patiently for more from you!
| mo chapter 34 . 8/16/2012
Let's have that one more chapter! Don't keep us waiting!
| NurseKelly chapter 34 . 8/15/2012
Really enjoying this story. Loved Flint's reaction to Giorgi-not telling him is the best revenge.
| mossley chapter 34 . 8/15/2012
Hmm, not sure whether to praise Hawk or call him an idiot, given the circumstances! :) Flint's always had a bit of a temper, and he's more than furious at this point and running on pure adrenaline.
I loved Giorgi's reaction. Sadness and disbelief that his son was dead, but then totally forgetting that when he learned of the caves. It fits so well with his earlier characterization. And Flint not telling him was probably the best 'revenge' he could get on him.
| mossley chapter 33 . 8/15/2012
Ah, the family was a really nice touch! It's canon in the cartoon that at least part of her immediate family is dead, a fact that often gets overlooked. Also loved the 'Bean' nickname and the story behind it!
| nejitenfan chapter 34 . 8/14/2012
update soon i love this story
| nejitenfan chapter 32 . 8/14/2012
please update soon
| mossley chapter 32 . 8/14/2012
You do like your cliffhangers, don't you? :D I'm glad LJ and Flint have finally gotten on the same page, although it looks like you still have some more stuff for them ahead. The sacrifices both were willing to make for the other show the depth of their love.
On a style note, it's been a long time - both in chapters and physical time - since those earlier conversations with Giorgi. A line or two of summary would have helped jogging the memory.
| nejitenfan chapter 30 . 8/11/2012
update soon please