|Reviews for Turbulence|
| Anonymous chapter 46 . 3/10
Decent avatar rewrite, horrible Zutara fanfic. No heat. Disappointed.
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/12
Hey, I'm really enjoying your story and I really love the way your making Zuko and Katara slowly grow to understand each other.
I was just a bit confused in this chapter where you mentioned Katara was tired from having to cut the bars, but I thought you said in the previous chapter that she was going to try cutting around the lock... Maybe I read that bit wrong?
Anyways it's a really nice story, keep up the good work :)
| WolfFT chapter 46 . 5/14/2015
Amazing story, but the last chapter was a tad disappointingly rushed. Alas, I admire the work that was put into the rest of it.
| Guest chapter 46 . 3/10/2015
Disappointing ending if I'm being honest. All the potential and you just wasted it in a single chapter. But the rest was good so there's a positive
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/9/2015
Or...not more 'Zuko Alone' vibe would have been better sort of feels like you rushed the fair li finding them
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/9/2015
This is the first ZK fanfic I have read that Zuko gets to have his own adventure away from the gaang or iroh it's amazing
| NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 46 . 1/4/2014
Thanks for finishing this and writing this interesting alternative to the 3rd Book of the series. It definitely had its high points and was pleasant to read.
| caspasta chapter 46 . 9/6/2013
love the zutara :]
| Symphony Solider chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
): I want to like this story so badly. Honestly, I do. The plot has infinite potential. Or should I say had, considering it was written so long ago. Although, that is way besides my point. Your characterization is just... Off. And your writing isn't very well thought out. I mean, its hard to picture what the characters are feeling/seeing because you give us one vauge sentence and that's it! But, again to the characterization being off. Toph asking for things? Iroh being a bit indecisive (in a non comical moment) Aang being... not Aang? I don't know, i'm just confused, I suppose. Your Azula characterization was impeccable, through! This is not meant as a flame, I'm just giving my opinion on the story. I am going to try and finish it though, so help me, God. Haha. See you at Chapter 46!
| servant123 chapter 46 . 5/30/2012
Ahhh! Sequel? Epilogue? Adopted ending? Anything? I feel like I was so left hanging! Good job on the rest of the story, though, it was really well done and probably one of the best- the best, actually- Zutara fic I've read. And I've read a lot. So, keep up the good work! And I hope your comic goes well :)
| servant123 chapter 34 . 5/29/2012
Ursa/Katara Mom time :) lovely
| servant123 chapter 33 . 5/29/2012
Disapprove! Sorry- but I HATE those random kisses, a couple's first kiss should be felt on both sides, I think. Of course, this isn't really focusing on that relationship, but still.
| servant123 chapter 32 . 5/29/2012
Great job with the honor bit. I liked it a lot :) Keep up the good work!
God bless :)
| servant123 chapter 31 . 5/29/2012
smiles for you!
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Fab job! Keep up the good work!
God bless! 3
| servant123 chapter 30 . 5/29/2012
I don't think I expanded as much as I should have on that last chapter- it was great. This thing you've done with Ursa was phenomenal. I totally didn't see it coming and it was done tastefully and written well. Fabulous work- keep it up! :)