|Reviews for Loser|
| BartWLewis chapter 3 . 3/10
Great story. It kinda sucks that Shego never came back, but life is like that I suppose. I really hope you make like a Loser 2 which is what happens if Shego did in fact come back.
| agitofang666 chapter 3 . 1/27
you just had to kill her huh? finally the guy can kill and he killed the one who could have bring him back from being what he had become damm
| Xalgusod chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
Youre a cold individual. Loved the story but the final chapter devastated me. That being said it was a great ending but not what I was expecting.
| supernova22 chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
sorry but the third chapter, completely hate it. just didnt got with the rest. kinda ruined it.
minus the 3rd chapter. i frickin love it, its the best shego/ron fic ive ever read.
u really might want to consider rewriting the last chapter
| Zanthraxone chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
First off Good story with the exception of the ending.
So I would say Drama/Romance does not qualify as it's category not to say I am flaming but for a first comment on FF that may qualify as a flame.
1. I would suggest changing the category to Angst/Romance, because one of the main chars dying qualifies as angst.
2. Please do a rewrite with a good-happy ending for those who would read it for that reason. I personally wouldn't have read it with the category of Angst, angst marked stories always ends badly for pretty much any reason thus the category.
3. I love the story and you have a great story plot but with the ending I just couldn't get myself to say that was a great story.
So to recap rewrite and I would love to read the rewrite, great story with the exception of the ending & Change The CATEGORIES.
Headed to your other stories hope they are rated appropriately.
| yawan5 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Rons story is so ad ;(
| Johny Blade chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Even though the ending was sorta not what i was hoping. It was still great. I was actually touched.
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
Damm that was a really dark ending but it was also great. Nice finishing touch.
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
Enjoyed the ending of this chapter
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Really liked this first chapter
| My Review Account chapter 3 . 12/7/2012
Love the story. Personally I don't think the end quite conveys the bleakness/brutality of the situation.
Perhaps instead of "I pulled the trigger and her eyes went dark." "I pulled the trigger and the contents of her skull painted a grey and crimson mosaic on the wall behind her. I tried to ignore the wet sound of her bowels releasing and the slowly expanding puddle of urine."
Really hammer it home. I'm kinda morbid though.
| bleach1990 chapter 3 . 11/17/2012
it was a good story but this type of ending is not the ones i like
| Officer Hot-Pants chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
Wow. It's... well, it's really good in a depressing sort of way, if that makes any sense. That *is* a compliment, just so it's clear.
| AirmanLance chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
Its a good story, and it captured my attention almost instantly. But it seemed that you either gave up on it or lost your insperation. It realy made me want more of it, please write more.
| Fox of the Blood Moon chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
these story sucks sorry to tell you but it does.