Reviews for Small packages
Shiori Kudo chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
In the first sentence, shouldn't the emphasis be on "stayed" and not on "wished"?
Raven On The Writing Desk chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Very well-written and an interesting idea.
BeautifulDesertFoxglove chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Ahahaha, cute! Don't be mean, Veritas, you know you like Forta.
mistrali chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
This started off well enough, and the concept makes an interesting change from all the L/J out there. We don't often get to hear from the dragons, so well done on thinking outside the box. However, a little punctuation does help your reader follow the story, believe it or not. If you punctuate your dialogue correctly, even if it's just the character's thoughts, your story becomes a lot easier to keep up with.
ImagingThings chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
XD Forta is so CUTE! Love the idea of her as a bunch of energy!
CatLover chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
CUTE! i love Veritas, and little diamond baby. very cute, a little out of character on Veritas part, but still nice and homey, i guess. well done.
heavenly chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
plz write more
Shadow Saiyan Widow chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Thank you for posting this, i used to read those books alot! brings back old memories
blerghy chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
Hahahah! Very entertaining story! I noticed some grammatical errors, like missing commas, but the plot was very good. I can just picture the little diamond dragon doing that! Keep writing! :D
She-Magus chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
that was...(dare I say the dreaded word?)...cute...there, I said it!