Reviews for The Thin Grey Line: Breaking the Oath
pt1oef chapter 7 . 6/26/2020
No more stories based on Macross? This is so unfortunate.
pt1oef chapter 6 . 6/26/2020
This is a good story. Too bad that it is not based on Macross.
orionastro chapter 7 . 5/6/2016
amazing story no doubt ,i hope for a sequel
Olaf74 chapter 7 . 4/1/2015
Thats in really interesting idea.
Olaf74 chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
spicarus chapter 7 . 8/5/2014
A very interesting and entertaining way to mix Robotech and Babylon 5 and season with Honor Harrington, Star Trek: Deep Space Nine and Star Trek Voyager.

So, was Sinclair Zor as well as Valen? Or was it some other friend of Sheridan's that left the message?
Illuviar chapter 7 . 9/8/2013
Great story!
edboy4926 chapter 7 . 7/5/2013
Good story
Independent Dude chapter 7 . 9/16/2012
I don't get it who was "aunt ariel?"
BlazeStryker chapter 4 . 1/26/2010
As the Zentraedi did function from cloning for quite a while, that source of origin for them and other human races like the Tirolians makes sense.

I say this for a couple of reasons.

One is that the Zentraedi knew of the madness in trying a fold in a gravity well. It's even remarked on right before Gloval managed to send his fold drive God-Only-Knows while the rest of the *Macross* and the Macross Island region deFolded at the orbit of Pluto.

Simply put, folding Spacetime and getting a rupture? Some of those ruptures are liable to be temporal.
DhampyrX2 chapter 7 . 12/10/2009
That was a terrific story as always Cyclone and it left me hungering for more.

Although there were two weapons that could have been brought in that you missed. One actually was the SDF-1, which by Macross canon (not Robotech but the original series) was still there in its artificial lake as a kind of national monument that fired off random blasts of its main gun into space.

The other, of course, would me Minmei's singing. Pipe that over the comm channels and make the Mindari want to commit suicide or defect just to find and kill her. It worked for the Zentraedi. :P
lord Martiya chapter 7 . 10/20/2009
Nice job. I'm more for the original Japanese Macross saga than Robotech, but that's quite a good story. I'd just wish I saw Sineval's face when the Human started to kick his ass...
Artemis1000 chapter 7 . 4/28/2009
What an amazing story! I love it!
King Henry the V chapter 7 . 4/2/2009
Cute story... I'd be curious as to a connection between the Shadow and the Children of Shadow. As for who did the voice of the monologue that starts each chapter/episode, I had in mind G'Kar when I was in a more serious mood, and Darth Vader when not.
Steven Kodaly chapter 3 . 11/27/2007
Now, THAT'S audacity - borrowing characters wholesale from Weber's Honorverse...
42 | Page 1 .. Last Next »