Reviews for ANBU Elements
Disturbedhrt chapter 11 . 7/2
It was good to chapter 8 then it went down hill could do with a reboot
Guest chapter 11 . 6/25
You said you would go to regular updates but it's been 6 1/2 years without a single new chapter. Will you continue?
Guest chapter 7 . 6/24
WAIT, WHAT?! DRUGS?!, DId you go to rehab?
anone chapter 1 . 6/4
5 paragraphs in and then the OCs just don't stop, and a nymph seriously? A nymph... in Naruto? And an OC who in your own words, "looks like Barbie." Are you trying for a parody or are you just not good at writing? And by the way, you should probably look up the difference between the words: "its and it's." Grammar is "slightly" important, you know. And Kawaii as as name just kind of sucks. This chapter reads like you are trying to set up a Powers Rangers team full of Mary Sue's or a ready made harem for Naruto. Sorry, but after this chapter, no dice. I was interested in the premise of your story, but this chapter just does not interest me. If you can't draw your reader in by the first chapter, unless they are really interested in your plot, you're eventually going to have your story down the drain. If you're going to make background that's going to suck and probably scare off readers, just don't do it. If you have a background that readers aren't going to like, it probably means you need a new background.
KnowledgeRobot chapter 11 . 4/21
Please continue this! It's too good to abandon.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/24
What happens nxt
RandomPasserby chapter 3 . 12/22/2014
Is Raven your own made OC? Cuz' she acts like what a author's OC will be like.
litpari chapter 11 . 11/28/2014
awwwwwwww damn keep going
sportytc chapter 11 . 8/8/2014
please can you start updating again please
JinchuurikiOfTheLeaf chapter 11 . 6/23/2014
Please update! o
yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 6/15/2014
this is amazing chapter :)
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 6/15/2014
Poor Naruto but He needs to give Kiba and Shino and Hinata Shikamaru and Chouji a chance though :(
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
Iam Glad Naruto has Family and friends and I hope Naruto And Hinata Get toghter :)
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 6/15/2014
1 PLEASE LET THIS NARUTO AND HINATA STORY
2 PLEASE LET KYUUBI AND NARUTO AND KAKASHI BE FRIENDS OR BROTHERS
3 PLEASE DON'T KILL THIRD HOKAGE
4 PLEASE LET THIS STORY REACH 100 CHAPTERS AND IAM GOING TO REVIEW EVERY CHAPTERS AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON :D
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
please Let this be Naruto and Hinata pairs in this story and please let this story reach 100 chapters :)
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