|Reviews for The Last Kingdom|
| Sarah chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
I like you story plz email me at i wanna talk please
| White Hunter chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
This story looks interesting so far I wonder what will happen next.
White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!
| Laura Lou Lou chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
hmm...there's potential for this story. I hope you continue
| NightMary chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Well, I'm glad someone hasn't forgotten The Neverending Story- and you've got an interesting protagonist.
Here are a few problems I found, however (sorry!)- the grammar was choppy and took attention away from what could have been a good beginning, it felt as though you were speeding too quickly through it (trust me, I KNOW what it's like to want to rush things), but you have to draw me in first, then tell me thhe story.
Again, great premise, and it's nice to reminsnce with a favorite movie series of mine.
I hope this helps!