Reviews for A Kidnapping
hateme101 chapter 3 . 8/1/2016
I like where this is going but all the AN in the middle of the story is extremely annoying. It breaks up the flow of the story, which is not cool. Makes me lose interest a bit
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
what if a ghost child kidnapped mai and naru because they look and act like its parents
Sarah chapter 10 . 7/18/2012
Write somethin bout a case on Mai bein Controlled by a fashion ghost
adanyasophia07 chapter 9 . 11/7/2011
lol . your story is so weird ? haha. what was the right term for that word ? hmm. *thinking hard* .

argg. nevermind ! haha. :D by the way, your story is really really fun ! haha. i've enjoyed reading it! haha. my favorite part is when Naru forgot something ! lol. thanks for the story ! :)
weezerz2490 chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
wow that little girl just has a matching everything huh?
Moons-Chan chapter 10 . 8/18/2008
Naru forget something! That's something worth reading! Nice story~
Skyz-Angels chapter 10 . 8/14/2008
lol , rare for Naru to forget to do something.
HawaiianCaffeine chapter 10 . 12/21/2007
that was an interesting story. . good job

Ayjah chapter 10 . 8/30/2007
grin I love that he forgot to raise the barrier :)
Ayjah chapter 5 . 8/30/2007
I am confused what was Mai and Naru arguing about?
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 10 . 8/20/2007

they're going to read Mai's diary? :)


my gosh,.,.

Naru could really be forgetful sometimes huh?

he forgot to take away the barrier?

how does he thnik the family will be able to come in?

hahahahah :)

great job with this story! :)

keep up the good work,.,. :)
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 5 . 8/20/2007
did she turn into the doll or something?
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 3 . 8/20/2007

Masako is so bad,.,.

wanting to keep Naru all to herself!

(i dont hate her thoguh,.,. she kind of gives spice to the NaruMai love team since she gets in between them a lot!)

hehehehhe :)
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 2 . 8/20/2007

Naru definitely find Mai cute in that outfit! :)

swet! :)
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 1 . 8/20/2007

pretty interesting story,.,. :)
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