Reviews for Suspicious Behavior
Satele chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
lol. Amazing stuff. Very well written. I like the premise of the story and how you crafted Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. It was ver cute and over all very entertaining. Good job and keep up the writing!
Rynnal chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
*giggling her head off* This.. was absolutely brilliant! You have a wonderful writing style, and a beautiful sense of humor. :D I totally loved this.
KaiPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
you are evil...i almost died trying to keep my laughs silent 'cause i found this fic and was reading while in a library...a library! do you know how hard it is to not laugh and get thrown out of the library!...one wouldn't think that it's hard...but apparantly it is...great story though
ObsidianJade chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
S: Hilarious!

Onyx: And very true to form for both of them.

S: UchiaPlum, the next Chia-pet revolution!

Onyx: (turns and stares at her light with an utterly bewildered expression on her face) You're exceptionally weird, you know that?

S: (beams) Thanks! Great story, love it much!
Shiraishi chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
Haha i love the last part, very good job!
Vegetarian Salad chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Most stories don't end as well as they started.

This just got progressively better. Really great - I loved it.
Elemental Dragon1 chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
hahah thats so funny! and in a way sweetish

Elemental~
dragoness simplicity chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
LMAO. You manage to keep Sasuke and Naruto's characters perfectly intact - Naruto's child-like innocence; and Sasuke's laid back attitude towards the entire situation.

You didn't resolve the issue of Ino's unrequited love for Sasuke but the ending was hilariously ironic enough to cover up this small detail. Well done on a perfectly original plotline.

~May your muse strike you pure and true~
Sekana Katayama chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *wipes tears from eyes*

That was fantastic, really. I loved the ending. *snigger*

Wonderful job! _
asdfghjkl12345678901234567890 chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
*falls off chair laughing* This is such an awesome story, and so cute too! 5 stars! Absolutely loved it!
Flyerfuge chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
This is so joyously canon.
chimerical chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Brilliant, just brilliant. Why doesn't this have more reviews? 'Cause this is definitely one of my favorite Sasu/Naru fics.

Much love.
Ragataz chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Great job. I really liked your one-shot. It was very cute. :)
Wistful-Eyes chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
That was beyond awesome. I love pieces like these. It's cute but it's still recognizably THEM. Naruto's not-so-subtle hints cracked me up, as well as him noticing how domestic things were with him and Sasuke. And Sasuke is in denial, as usual, but not convincingly so, as usual. XD Ooh, I really really loved this.
left-alone chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
great fic! I really did enjoy it! it's the first one-shot I've reviewed in the longest time and I think yours deserved it!
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