Reviews for Suspicious Behavior
Seto's Darkness chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Hahaha, I LOVE this fic _ It's funny and it's IC (well, aside from Sasuke's open stalking) and it's so cute D

And the ending was like...full circle .

Eh~ write more fics like this! :D

-Seto's Darkness :)
Miyabi-Maru chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Very, very cute. I wish I had more to say, or something that could make me sound intelligent, but I honestly don't know what else to put. This was just cute. It certainly brought on a smile.
SweetG chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
Your crush is still bigger than mine! xD That was freakin' lovely :)...

*Gives her a cookie* Keep writin' good SasuNaru stuff!
Sleeper1519 chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
That was fabulous!
Gonrie chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
It's actually been on my favorite for a long time in my livejournal memories.

Hope to see you write more soon

Gonrie
Rhionae chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
*lol* That was just perfect! *g*
Adversaria chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
*snickers madly*

their relationship is so fucked up...

great story!
BlackEyedWicca chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Aw i loved th ending! Great work! So kawaii!

Luv

BEW
CaveDwellers chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
HAHAHA!

omg, that was BRILLIANT!

haha, rivals -even when they know they like each other

and then whole tripping over each other on the way to the bathroom thing was great!

no spelling/grammar/punctuation errors that i can see

and a great story that keeps the characters well... in character

i really enjoyed it, thanks for posting!
3 chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
This is made of absolute internet win. Such a nice light story with good humor sprinkled generously throughout. The way you write is perfect and the flow of the story is so smooth from one event to another (though I'm rather concerned for Ino...).

You protray such a hesistant and awkward love which is such a nice break from the usual angst/deepthoughts/emotionalrollercoaster that pops up like daisies. And I love how you never made it too fluffy with 'I love you's and 'I love you too,'s. Their fighting and insulting all the way down. xD

I love this one-shot.
gadez chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
i can so imagine this happening...those two retards...i guess i also fell in love with this fic
AngelicConquistador chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Oh my dear ramen! I loved that! That was just done so... PERFECTLY! I mean it. WOW. I loved the whole 'tripping over him on the way to the bathroom' thing. LOL! And Naruto's 'subtle' hints! This was absolutely great. Dammit, I wish I could favorite it, but I have no room! ;; I shall have to add you as a favorite author then. You're worthy enough. :3 Please do more SasuNarus! If you make more like this then I'll definitely be giving you more reviews. X3

-rei
Drownedinlight chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
XDD That was really funny~ good job!
Frosty Pig chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
the first thing I thought when I read this was, "That's it. I'm in love with this fic!" I swear, this was awesome! _! It was so in character, I wish you would write more to this... its really really good.
Naoko-Miharu chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
LOL that was hilarious and cute x)

Nice job~

-Miharu(:
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