Reviews for Uninvited
A guest chapter 18 . 12/26/2016
Excellent, excellent story. You have real talent. However, you really need to work on your writing. Absolutely awesome story.
Datura13 chapter 18 . 9/1/2013
I loved your story! It was very anti straight laced Jedi Obi Wan, which was refreshing. I was hooked until the end.
Starhunter79 chapter 18 . 2/21/2013
Great story. During the engagement party I was actually embarrassed and sorry for both Obi Wan and Padme. I love how you make your stories come to life and draw the reader in. Which in turn reveals your passion for the subject matter. Only someone who loves what they write could make a connection to their readers and allow the reader to dive head first into their work. Aanakin's temper working to advantage was a refreshing change, instead of getting him into trouble he was actually able to help.

Was Palpatine aware who Zars really was or was he just a minor character? Is Palpatine in league with Zars? If Zars was Xanatos why didn't anyone sense his presence? And when will the 5th Xanatos appear? These are just some of the questions that I had after reading this story. I love when I read something that makes me think and leaves me with wanting more. Thank you for your wonderful story.
Princess Ashira chapter 18 . 2/1/2011
I'm afraid I have to agree with MadBrilliant1880.

Obi-Wan should always be allowed to sing, provided that he isn't totally wasted.
lalez chapter 18 . 11/30/2009
you dared me to read more of your stories and well here i am

i was wondering all the time while reading this

why you chose almania as the name for the planet

it is pretty close to the roman name for germany alemania or the french allemagne ...

the story was really great as well and yeah ani was quite good in here :)
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 18 . 7/20/2008
he should sing. naked and covered in oil and glitter. jumping...
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MadBrilliant1880 chapter 16 . 7/20/2008
nice timing!
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 15 . 7/20/2008
great chapter
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MadBrilliant1880 chapter 12 . 7/20/2008
great chapter
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 11 . 7/20/2008
hooray for anakin!
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 10 . 7/20/2008
now how's he going to save her?
MadBrilliant1880 chapter 9 . 7/20/2008
great chapter
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