|Reviews for Becoming Whole|
| CentauRita chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
Edward has good taste ;P
| CentauRita chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
Oooo, Edward has an errand to run. Hmmm.
| CentauRita chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
Could you cue that deep sensuous growl from Edward...again! That was...HAWT!
| CentauRita chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
What a brute of an animal for forcing himself on Bella.
WTG! Esme...you go momma vamp!
| CentauRita chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Bella having a vamps and the bees talk with Esme...Awww.
| CentauRita chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Edward can hear Bella's thoughts?...effen fabulous!
| CentauRita chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
It's okay Edward...she will ;[
| CentauRita chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
'V' is not for victory...it's for Victoria.
Alice didn't see this, because?
| Drithligh chapter 12 . 3/4/2013
Will Charlie arrest Jacob now? That's what should happen after murder and attempted murder. Of course, with no body and no witnesses I guess he can't. Will Bella be blocking Edward again?
| Drithligh chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
Well at least you figured out how to get Bella to give up on Jake. I really hated how Bella was so desperately clingy to both Edward and Jake in Eclipse.
| Drithligh chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I'm not sure what was more unexpected, Victoria chomping on Bella in the bathroom or Bella kissing Tyler in the gym. Busy day... Lol. Very interesting first chapter.
| Alejadra Cullen chapter 23 . 1/31/2013
i loved you story! :)
| rowenasheir chapter 24 . 12/22/2012
Fanfic is unfair. Some of the best written stories have disappeared. We need an adult site or new rating to send them to.
| MatingInspires chapter 24 . 10/21/2012
Really enjoyed this and the companion story!
| gracieloulou chapter 24 . 10/19/2012
l love your story.