Reviews for Becoming Whole
CentauRita chapter 10 . 4/4/2013
I really like a teasing Edward ;}
CentauRita chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
Silly Bella, who else would he be looking at like that! Certainly NOT Charlie ;}
CentauRita chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
Edward has good taste ;P
CentauRita chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
Oooo, Edward has an errand to run. Hmmm.
CentauRita chapter 6 . 4/4/2013
**cough, cough**

Could you cue that deep sensuous growl from Edward...again! That was...HAWT!
CentauRita chapter 5 . 4/4/2013
What a brute of an animal for forcing himself on Bella.

WTG! Esme...you go momma vamp!
CentauRita chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Bella having a vamps and the bees talk with Esme...Awww.
CentauRita chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Freaked!

Edward can hear Bella's thoughts?...effen fabulous!
CentauRita chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
It's okay Edward...she will ;[
CentauRita chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
'V' is not for victory...it's for Victoria.

and,

Alice didn't see this, because?
Drithligh chapter 12 . 3/4/2013
Will Charlie arrest Jacob now? That's what should happen after murder and attempted murder. Of course, with no body and no witnesses I guess he can't. Will Bella be blocking Edward again?
Drithligh chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
Well at least you figured out how to get Bella to give up on Jake. I really hated how Bella was so desperately clingy to both Edward and Jake in Eclipse.
Drithligh chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I'm not sure what was more unexpected, Victoria chomping on Bella in the bathroom or Bella kissing Tyler in the gym. Busy day... Lol. Very interesting first chapter.
Alejadra Cullen chapter 23 . 1/31/2013
i loved you story! :)
rowenasheir chapter 24 . 12/22/2012
Fanfic is unfair. Some of the best written stories have disappeared. We need an adult site or new rating to send them to.
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