|Reviews for Becoming Whole|
| smileon chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
This story is fabulous! I'm seriously in love with it, haha. I can't believe Jacob, he's so, gr! haha. Bella and Edward are extremely cute going back and forth. I can't wait to see what happens with Charlie. Post more when you can :) :) :)
| Watching Eternity chapter 12 . 3/13/2007
oh my gosh. That was INTENSE beyond belief! Amazing! That was really good, keep up the great work!
| Infatuated Passion chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
that was so beautiful. write the next chapter and hurry!
| cheerbearsmiles chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
Please tell me you can post the next chapter of this tomorrow! I'm getting too involved in this!
| Stepmother chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
Ah, that was lovely.
| Atira7 chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
AH! I REALLY hope you can update soon! And just to clarify, by soon I mean NOW!
| keithlee chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
*whimper*. you have to have this thing updated very soon. oh my god. i'm dying here. i'll do whatever you want. have you read my story? i'll update it. i bake you cookies. whatever you want. UPDATE. byes for now.
| shobbs chapter 11 . 3/13/2007
Wow, well that was certainly an interesting twist. :]
| shobbs chapter 10 . 3/13/2007
But a beautiful tease.. :]
| Chi Cullen chapter 10 . 3/13/2007
That's it so far? This is THE BEST fansequel I have read on fanfiction. I am writing one too(337 pages, written) but never have the time to type. So would it sound hypecritical if I threatened you to type or perish? Because I am telling you now...TYPE, OR DIE!-_O
Okay, phsyco moment over
But seriously. Update, or I WILL DIE!
| cheerbearsmiles chapter 10 . 3/12/2007
This story is intoxicating! I love the playful banter between Edward and Bella. I can't wait for the next chapters, please hurry!
| Cullen-Dark Series Obsessed chapter 10 . 3/12/2007
WOW! I love the whole story!
| MtDewFaerie chapter 10 . 3/12/2007
Absolutely wonderul. I love the quick updates and the chapters are amamzing. I can't get enough! Keep up the great work
| GreysAutumn chapter 10 . 3/12/2007
i really love this story! please update soon!
| keithlee chapter 10 . 3/12/2007
aw. how sweet. i loved it. this one and the last chapter. that last one was particularly fluffy and wonderful. i want you to update really soon. b/c i love your story so much. byes for now.