|Reviews for ProTest|
| barbiedoll chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
Just came across this fic, love it! Sigh... brought back memories when Jeff Hardy was released. Glad he's back and now, WWE CHAMPION! Keep writing as you write well.
| Kian Jaden chapter 2 . 11/16/2008
This stuff is great. You really captured the not so glamorous side of Jeff. I like that u added his smoking habit as well. A lot of people don't know that he smokes. I also like the songs u used, they match what Jeff is thinking perfectly. Please, please write more on this.
| h.elie chapter 2 . 10/2/2008
I don't know if you are still checking these or not, but if you are I think you should finish this story. It is a good start and I think it could be a great story.
| JNHwwe chapter 2 . 4/3/2007
I love this...I think it has just the right amount of depression for jeff and is going at a nice steady pace, not just rushing into the drama of it, its one of my faves can not wait till the next chapters. Keep it up.
| courtney chapter 2 . 3/16/2007
LOVE IT KEEP IT COMIGN OR GET 2 SLAP U OVER THIS COMPUTER...I LOVE IT ...AWSOME
X much love X
| deConstruction chapter 2 . 3/10/2007
Well, I was waiting in anticipation for the next chapter and you more than delivered.
Let me say it now, I love your writing style. I've already said it I know, but people who write in the first person (when it isn't a self-insertion) get my respect automatically. It's a really difficult thing to achieve - to write as someone else from their perspective. But you're doing such an awesome job.
The way you portray Jeff's character is just awe inspiring. I feel his emotions from exhaustion to confusion and everywhere else in between. The way hte wrestling 'industry' is weaved into is fantastic.
I can't say enough about this story. Excellent job. I'm really looking forward to the next update. Keep up this amazing work.
Love and Light,
| SRC chapter 2 . 3/9/2007
Great start. I love me some strung up Jeffro. I really like that it's written in first person. I always think that is the most challenging way to right because you have to truly commit to the characters.
I love the first line:
Nothing's ever a secret in this business. Nothing.
That is genius. Like, the type of genius where you're like, "why the hell didn't I think of that!"
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
| HayyBay chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
thats really good so far who is jeff gonna end up with?
| deConstruction chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
Very great start. I love first-person writte fiction. I tried it once, and sucked so bad that I swore off it for life and started abusing a pint of vanilla ice cream. It wasn't a pretty sight.
Anything with Jeff Hardy gets a read from me, and I'm glad I checked this out. You have a good narrative, combined with a clear character and their thoughts/feelings. Keep me interested
I'm looking forward to the next update. Keep up the great work.
Love & Light,