|Reviews for Lost soul|
| brutusjr chapter 97 . 3h
Your fight scenes go one "way" too long.
Good story otherwise...
| Son Of Oblivion 7 chapter 30 . 9/10
It was good until the whole Akina bullshit. I never flame but fucking seriously? She was a genin had no training after naruto beat her ass went to Tsunade and was able to keep up with a Jonin? Shizune I could let slide but Akina fuck no. Also how did the seal even open!? Kurama can not freely seperate his consciousness from his host. Even if I ignored all of the Kurama seal stuff. You're telling me everyone jist overlooked her as the other jinchuriki that had a seal on her stomach and was right beside Naruto and his dead parents? Even if you try and say Hiruzen hid her. Question comes up why didn't they do the same for Naruto. It's obvious you threw her in on a whim because you needed a way to challenge Naruto in a sense but it was so overwhelmingly disappointing. Your telling me all the intense training he went through(was forced to do to become a weapon) they never realized he literally couldn't transform into his bijuu like I don't know Yugito and Killer Bee! Even if he couldn't do it because Kurama was being stubborn like in Cannon they'd still have noticed a lack of chakra on that scale. He's essentially the five tailed bijuu. It was wonderful at first but that entire chapter killed it. One last thing Akina getting spared during the whole Konoha civil war bit was also bullshit because he had no reason to and spared absolutely nobody else. If anything you built this story to ride on the fact Naruto is insanely intelligent and he wouldn't have let anyone walk away from there if he had no reason to. With Gaara he was confused and had to save Hiruzon. But there he just did it because why the fuck not. Chapter 29 marked the death of this fanfic to be honest with you. If others like it great I don't mind that. If you like it good job man it's your creation go crazy. But realistically this fanfiction has some big fucking plot holes.
| Banshee-024 chapter 13 . 9/8
woah... the council... I love you op
| JlovesGaara chapter 12 . 9/3
Wow. I hope Naruto takes the Third's last mission to heart.
| BlueTea21 chapter 11 . 9/2
| BlueTea21 chapter 9 . 9/2
Once. Just once, I want to see Hinata kick Neji's butt. *crosses fingers*
| arsalan.rex chapter 15 . 8/23
Damn... This is something.. The best Dark Naruto fanfic I've read.. N I've been reading fics for more than 7 years.. Keep up the good work..
| matschneider92 chapter 1 . 8/19
one chapter... one and you have me crying man
and im a grown ass man 25 years old
| Guest chapter 55 . 7/28
Okay my dad is paralyzed so this hit deep
| DrunkenPanda chapter 1 . 7/27
WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Pretty much crying now...
| Chrisfragger chapter 4 . 7/25
I know this is an old story and my opinion doesn't really matter... But would Sarutobi really let these Council bastards roll him like this?
| IndianaJohhney chapter 1 . 7/24
| Guest chapter 117 . 7/19
And so ends the story of destruction personified
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
I read and reread this story almost 25 times and every time that I read it, it's as amazing as the first time. It is something that I can describe but every time I find myself sucked back in and finishing it with tears in my eyes. The best story never told
| Ade chapter 117 . 7/15
Did I miss sth...or the Sasuke part was entirely dropped?