This fic was tragic, brutal, and also an inspiration.

amazing story!

this is BS melodramatic ending

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All my bros hate Hiruzen

Dont read naruto dies to Pein

Honesty i love the plot in begining

Love it

Why does he need a mask? It won't be easier if he just blends in with the crowd pretending to be a simple genin like everyone else. I mean, why does he need a mask? For what purpose? Like he's embarrassed by his voice? Does a sword have a will?

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This has to be the most retarded novel I've read that's not some anfsty crap written by a. 14 year old. First of all, if hiruzen didn't want the council to do something, they couldn't do it. He has the most powerful military force in the world held like puppets at his fingertips. There's no way some civilians could tell him what to do. Moreover even if the clan heads banded together to have Naruto killed, sarutobi has enough personal power to kill all of them by himself. That's why he's the hokage. The only reason he could help Naruto in Canon of was because the whole village had negative feels towards him and even then, they couldn't touch him because they feared the hokage and it's not easy to change opinion of a group of people. Second is that he died in the end. Any fic that has the Mc turning himself into a martyr and dying pathetically in the end, isn't one that's worth reading.

Messed up.

okay i cant imgine how the councils ass clenched HARD!

idk how many times I've reread this story by now but this bit with kakashi and ibiki always gives me a chuckle lol

The story is confusing, jumping between multiple points of view while trying to cover everything at once. Naruto's death was weak; he just sat and screamed... then he was done, it was boring. Also, if there are jutsu with Japanese words, don't forget to translate them; nobody knows what they mean because Japanese has different meanings in its kanji.

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