Reviews for Lost soul
Yangen chapter 117 . 2/19
God FUCKING damnit dude.
Re-read it after a long time, and it's still such a good goddamn story.
If anyone knows of other stories which might be as interesting as this was to me, please let me know.
I thank you so much for this story, LD. Cheers.
Guest chapter 117 . 2/12
That was simply epic dude. Hats off to ya
Mr. Hide chapter 117 . 2/9
Can't find words. Too Awesome!
duy.tranphuc chapter 1 . 2/9
Damn you! It is an awesome way to start the story.
ZinaThePanda chapter 2 . 2/5
Kakashi is too OOC here. You're using the same voice for both him and Sarutobi, so the interaction is a bit flat. He should be about 20 here, if I remember correctly; his laidback facade should be set up by now. Even if he dropped it, there would be no flailing. He was once 'the perfect shinobi' as well. I'm sorry if this seems preachy, I only mean to constructively criticize.
Kalvin Houzer chapter 1 . 1/28
OMG how can I delete that previous comment of mine? sorry about that I just wanted to my comments pls.
Kalvin Houzer chapter 1 . 1/28
sasuke was abducted by aliens? xD just joking thou
Guest chapter 117 . 1/23
This was one of the greatest fanfics that I have ever read, but what happened to saskue. He was like I'm going to disappear into the forest and then we never saw him again
CrixusPR chapter 55 . 1/11
I throughly enjoy reading this! Thank you so much for Guan and Yoshino! I gotta admit, this is very different from other fanfics and making Konoha's Rookies divided was a stroke of brilliance. I hate you for it, but it is also what makes me love you. Beautiful use of words and im not even half way done! THANK YOU!
cyanide wine chapter 117 . 1/8
this is a master work
Guest chapter 115 . 12/31/2016
Gai would crush kankuro while barely trying
Amon Kashino chapter 117 . 12/26/2016
Biggest goddamn disappointment. This story needs to be revamped and rewritten from the ground up it started epically and great but the second and third parts tore apart that beautiful beginning and I wasted all day reading this story only to come away pissed with its development and ending
Amon Kashino chapter 69 . 12/26/2016
So far the third act has been disappointing with supposedly how well naruto did for 9 years the prosperous and overall happiness from the lands he already united, there should be much less unrest against him. There's more I don't like and I'm betting I'll dislike the ending but I'll keep reading
Amon Kashino chapter 6 . 12/26/2016
Disappointing chapter as strong as naruto is and the fact he's anbu and could fell armies with ease the fact he got hit and poisoned is ludicrous and annoying I call bullshit
Random Guy chapter 5 . 12/25/2016
Undercover GENIN means rolling over kakashi in the bell test.
And what ever happened to naruto being all dead inside, what with the annoyance at lateness and the need to sprout cheap one liners?
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