Reviews for Lost soul
Guest chapter 2 . 1/23
This story is so good! I can't put it down ;;
Lord Asmodeus chapter 116 . 1/7
Revolting. Disgusting. Repulsive.

Follower of the doctrine of Leibniz? No wonder the ending was so vile, and many elements such as the sister and lover were not only cliche, but as vile as possible.

The cycle continues. It is perpetual. Eternal. Refuting otherwise is idiocy.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 20 . 12/18/2014
i suppose that Akina will be Naruto's Sister and probably have the other half of Kurama sealed in her (i hope im wrong)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 19 . 12/18/2014
hmm, sad that Itachi didn't join him... also seems that the MS isn't effective against Kurama or at least it isn't while it is sealed or maybe only EMS is effective against it...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 18 . 12/18/2014
oh, i wonder if Itachi will join him... i really hope he does, Itachi is badass and can help with him gain mastery of Kurama
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 16 . 12/18/2014
hmm, i would have thought that Kurama and Naruto would get along a little better or perhaps at least have some respect for each other

anyways, a great chapter...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 15 . 12/18/2014
damn, that wasn't a fight... that was a slaughter... damn, Naruto is badass... really looking forward to see how Naruto and Temari get together (assuming they do but going by the tags it seems logical)
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 14 . 12/18/2014
holy hell, this is awesome... i never saw it going like this... i thought it was gonna get rather crap when Hiruzen gave his last order but this, this is awesome...

im sorry i ever doubted you
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 13 . 12/18/2014
ok, i take back my last review... you took me completely of guard with this... very well done...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 12 . 12/18/2014
argh, really, you just had to put him on the whole stupid peace path crap
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
yup and there is the Cliche of him teaching/training them... im likely out
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 6 . 12/18/2014
so he let his guard down? that seems highly unlikely and was just a pathetic attempt to keep it as canon as possible
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 3 . 12/18/2014
umm, i dont see why he could't still wear Anbu gear or something similar to it... and kinda disappointed your doing place him on a fucking Genin squad when could slaughter most Jonin and Anbu
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 12/18/2014
oh yes, and i seriously hope you stay as you are...
Tomas chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
I enjoy this story and read up to chapter 15, I want to keep going but don't have time to read everything.
Are there any parts I could skip?
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