|Reviews for Lost soul|
| The Lord of War chapter 115 . 10/21/2013
This is the longest chapter. I have ever read on this site.
| The Lord of War chapter 116 . 10/21/2013
Man this chapter was deep.
| The Lord of War chapter 117 . 10/21/2013
My God! What a story.
| TANdawn chapter 117 . 10/20/2013
This was a fantastic story and in the end as sad as it was I'm not sure it could have ended any other way. It seems to me that Naruto won in the end. He brought a world of peace. No one wants to fight anymore they're all tired of fighting. They all seem broken really. Naruto brought peace to the world by breaking the world's will to fight. He opened the door for a new world by destroying the old one. Truly a brilliant story had some technical issues but the plot and characters are what brought this story to life.
| awesomeconji1 chapter 13 . 10/13/2013
Okay this was the coolest ending to any of the chapters of any stories I've ever read on this website. Good job.
| turtlefan16 chapter 117 . 10/13/2013
Damn this story was addicting spent most of the day reading it.
| Illuviar chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
Great start of the story!The parts about Kakashi were hilarious!;D
| Monki-Neko chapter 32 . 9/28/2013
one more thing: your use of the ellipsis needs some work. many times they are used when it would be better to place a double slash instead for emphasis. an other times, it is consecutively more than once in the same sentence...while that's not bad, it is unnecessary a number of times.
| Monki-Neko chapter 30 . 9/28/2013
i like the storyline so far and the way you've executed said events, but you know you have a few punctuation errors throughout your story, right? especially with the question marks in place of periods, periods placed out of order and missing words, though this happens less often. also, ive only seen this once so far, but you have misplaced a dividing line between scene-shifts, the other times you just forget to place one, i think.
| nomad chapter 117 . 9/20/2013
Set it free! sad , ethereal beauty .. a new world . I have no idea whether i want a sequel or not . Well thnx for this masterpiece . It was one hell of a journey n i loved everyword of it! Thank you :-)
| Zeran X chapter 33 . 9/18/2013
So where the hell is Temari the story says it's about naruto and her what gives? does that come much later in the story or what?
| duchessme chapter 5 . 9/11/2013
so naruto's stronger than the genius kakashi who was born during war and fought such a young age and been active for so long?his past war experiences were nothin he was out in anbu for a long time but doesnt mean he had become an inactive nin and his skills had become who cares?your story..just an
| Guest chapter 117 . 9/1/2013
That... That was deep.
| kmtdiccion chapter 117 . 8/31/2013
This is by far, THE MOST INCREDIBLE STORY I've read in this site! No wonder this one has the best reception from the readers. Although I saw grammatical errors or less fluid sentences, it didn't matter for me since I was so caught up from the plot.
I applaud your intricate plot line. It even looks like you planned it out with great thought.
And once again, Thanks for one heck of a ride. Now if ever my 'plan' succeeds, I'll put this one on one of the 'Naruto Fan Fiction Hall of Fame'. :)
'Til next time!
| ArcaneMaverick chapter 111 . 8/24/2013
I never understand love stories like this. Who kisses someone because of anger and whatever? I don't feel the romance is logical, but I can't tell if it's you or the cliche.