Reviews for Lost soul
tennisdesi91 chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
haha ... wow ... great chapter ... yeah ... i think i have a feeling of how naruto's gonna do in the test ... haha
Quathis chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
I so enjoy scenes with ANBU being terrified by an angry woman.
tennisdesi91 chapter 2 . 3/10/2007
wow ... haha ... good chapter ... and kakashi's right ... yeah
InTheYearOfTheCat chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Lol. I though Kurenai was the pairing for sure. :P And yeah about the cliche and crappy writing concept. I tend to notice that, not that I can complain. My writing isn't the greatest at all.
kamon13 chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
I was just going to ask if it was a NaruKure pairing, but that would be too easy. You shouldn't have said whether or not Kurenai was the girl. Nice, only seen the plot, (at least the plot so far) a couple of times.
VA23 chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
you make a very nice story chapter. plese continue.
kamiii chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
wo, a new chapter again! very fast, great story, a really awesome storry cuz the chapters are coming in fast and the story line is sweet! i cant wait to find out who the pairings are
TenWings chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Allahee4life chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Pretty good last two chapters, though I could tell they were rushed (you did state you were itching to reach the end of the Chuunin exams quickly). They were fairly entertaining despite that. As for high-quality Naruto fics to check out, there's The 'Idiot's Guide to Nindo' by James Ray Edwards (by far one of the better Naruto x-over fics out there), 'Shrouded Orange' by Vesvius B (great Naruto-Bleach x-over), 'Legend of Uzumaki Naruto: A Beginning' by General Grievous (though you've probably heard of it, very well written and very long, x-over with World of Warcraft), and 'The Dichotomy of Kazama Naruto' by Thundereaper (Naruto that has massive potential to kick ass, and a harem fic to boost). If you need any source of inspiration, these fics are definitely the place to go. Hope to see another update soon (same with 'Naruto of the Shikon').
chm01 chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
is the pairing temari?
guest chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
pretty good for fumes but i hope you update the other fics soon i want to see a new chapter for a twist of fate or naruto of the shikon which i think is your best work so far
Alkinaz chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
once again, your stories never fail to deliver.

my one question is...

WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE "The Strength of Brothers"?


Shuuwai chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Wow, just wow is what I can say
applejioux chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
Bah. I know what you mean about the author's not updating. Today has been really good with updates, but I often go weeks without an update and that just ruins my mood altogether. D: I know of some pretty rad fanfics, but you should tell me what you like. Yaoi/Yuri/Het, specific pairing you like or want to avoid, Cannon or not, things like that. I'll post a list of suitable fanfics once or if you reply. ) Awesome chapter, and hope you update soon. ,
Silver Bane chapter 3 . 3/10/2007
i know exactly what you mean about gleaning ideas off of other fic. not really stealing but using them in a new and unique way. most of the fics i read today are kinda half assed or more like half thought threw. im sorry to say it but the greatness that is fanfics is slowly decreeing. you get a few good ones every now and then but the great begingings start to slow down and i loose interst. i have found some fics though that do 'interst' me but im driven away by horrable spelling and some times they dont even put "" signs for when people are talking making it hard to read and after a while i just give up. anyways i like this fic and i hope you continue and if you need any ideas just put up a AN and ill type somethin up that might give you a boost.
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