|Reviews for Inevitable Fate|
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/11
Well I think I am not gonna review now that's pritty demanding!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/11
Well rain what if I don't want to reveiw
| Billy1234 chapter 2 . 1/6
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
Not bad make more please
| ILoveEandA chapter 2 . 8/22/2014
Aww so sweet please continue the story it is so wonderful XD
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2014
hurry up and make another one
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/7/2014
Loooooooove it! need moore! :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
Dude make the next chapter or I will hunt you down
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2013
This is amazing please keep updating!
| someone somewher chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS! ITS AMAZING
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
| Jed Jane Sheehan chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
You are awesome
| levi chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
i love this make a lot of chapter
| Tom S chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Despite some the phrases being a bit clumsy eg."and the said man turned" (and this is very picky). There is little I can find to fault this. Fits with Paolini's style and quite frankly explores the characters feelings better than he does. I'd quite like it if such things happened between the two of them but ah well. Keep it up and remember to do something that Paolini didn't do fantastically which is the characterisation in the books.
| Awesomest chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
Hi! I loved it! But I think you should say that there are spoilers, even though it's pretty obvious. Bye!