Reviews for Inevitable Fate
melindadragon chapter 2 . 3/12/2016
It's very good! Are you still writing it? I am a huge fan of this story!
Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
Well I think I am not gonna review now that's pritty demanding!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Well rain what if I don't want to reveiw
Billy1234 chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Love it!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
Not bad make more please
ILoveEandA chapter 2 . 8/22/2014
Aww so sweet please continue the story it is so wonderful XD
Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2014
hurry up and make another one
Guest chapter 2 . 4/7/2014
Loooooooove it! need moore! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
Dude make the next chapter or I will hunt you down
Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2013
This is amazing please keep updating!
someone somewher chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
Jed Jane Sheehan chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
You are awesome
levi chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
i love this make a lot of chapter
Tom S chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Well done.

Despite some the phrases being a bit clumsy eg."and the said man turned" (and this is very picky). There is little I can find to fault this. Fits with Paolini's style and quite frankly explores the characters feelings better than he does. I'd quite like it if such things happened between the two of them but ah well. Keep it up and remember to do something that Paolini didn't do fantastically which is the characterisation in the books.
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