|Reviews for Inevitable Fate|
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
Dude make the next chapter or I will hunt you down
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/3/2013
This is amazing please keep updating!
| someone somewher chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS! ITS AMAZING
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
| Jed Jane Sheehan chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
You are awesome
| levi chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
i love this make a lot of chapter
| Tom S chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Despite some the phrases being a bit clumsy eg."and the said man turned" (and this is very picky). There is little I can find to fault this. Fits with Paolini's style and quite frankly explores the characters feelings better than he does. I'd quite like it if such things happened between the two of them but ah well. Keep it up and remember to do something that Paolini didn't do fantastically which is the characterisation in the books.
| Awesomest chapter 2 . 4/13/2012
Hi! I loved it! But I think you should say that there are spoilers, even though it's pretty obvious. Bye!
| CaptainBeer chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
Very good! I like the jealousy thing, but can you update it anytime soon :(
| rms199723 chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
it was a awsome chapter is love how arya gets jealous twice
| tangerle chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
| okay chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
i think the story was well written and had a great concept, but you left it rather undeveloped at the end...you might want to consider adding more to it. however, it was enjoyable! :)
| Shurtagal chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
cool and grawsome ... FINISH IT NOW!
| Sky chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
| angelica parker chapter 2 . 10/25/2011
right more please!i really want you to right more cuz its so awesome!and i want 2 c wat will happen with arya and eragon...they need to b 2 gether luv the story thank u!