Reviews for Naiveté
Wolfcryptic chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Oh gosh...That is so adorable :3.
zoelee chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
oh I love this~ very tragic but sweet.
m o o g l e d a i m e chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
It was sad to see Esther missing Abel and Ion pining for Esther but the end made me smile. That was so good!
xTamashii chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
That was -applauds- You're amazing.
lithiumxflower chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
:( That was so sad! And yet, it was so adorable! I love Ion and Esther, but it was sad to see her mourning over Abel the whole time. Must've been hard..But this was really good. Hope to see more soon XD
Tsukiaa chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
I thought this was definitely a good story. A really great one.

You should write more!

-Tsukia, tma.
RadiantBeam chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Oh my gosh. (faints)

Thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this marvelous piece of writing! Truly beautiful... I was near tears at the end, gah...

I hope to see more from you!

(Adds to Favorites)
Red Mermaid chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Arallion chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Very nice. I like the pacing - because of the quickness of the read it becomes almost like a heartbeat pattern, little vignettes captured in time-lapse photography. I have a soft spot for that style, I'll have to admit. But despite my bias, I'm sure I'm not alone in thinking this came out rather well.

Thanks for posting! :)