|Reviews for Naiveté|
| Wolfcryptic chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
Oh gosh...That is so adorable :3.
| zoelee chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
oh I love this~ very tragic but sweet.
| m o o g l e d a i m e chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
It was sad to see Esther missing Abel and Ion pining for Esther but the end made me smile. That was so good!
| xTamashii chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
That was amazing...just...wow. -applauds- You're amazing.
| lithiumxflower chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
:( That was so sad! And yet, it was so adorable! I love Ion and Esther, but it was sad to see her mourning over Abel the whole time. Must've been hard..But this was really good. Hope to see more soon XD
| Tsukiaa chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
I thought this was definitely a good story. A really great one.
You should write more!
| RadiantBeam chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Oh my gosh. (faints)
Thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this marvelous piece of writing! Truly beautiful... I was near tears at the end, gah...
I hope to see more from you!
(Adds to Favorites)
| Red Mermaid chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
WOW! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!
| Arallion chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
Very nice. I like the pacing - because of the quickness of the read it becomes almost like a heartbeat pattern, little vignettes captured in time-lapse photography. I have a soft spot for that style, I'll have to admit. But despite my bias, I'm sure I'm not alone in thinking this came out rather well.
Thanks for posting! :)