|Reviews for His Back|
| HappyTheDragon18 chapter 1 . 7/19
Seriously though, great work! I really like these kind of stories (as weird as that sounds) because you don't see them all the time. xD
| sakuzi-chan chapter 1 . 7/8
Lovely fic. The start, the action, angst and circle round. Good pacing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
Awww~! It was a great story but I advise you to break the paragraphs when it gets too long. It's kinda hard to read when there was too many lines in one paragraph. But overall, great story!
| Catherine667 chapter 1 . 1/22
The dialogue in this story is just spot on. Not to mention hilarious at times. Ed and Roy are absolutely in character. Great job! A nice read for sure.
| FaelanaSnow chapter 1 . 1/8
This was a wonderful story! 3
| allee8246 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Wow! That was truly fantastic. I can't believe how well written that was, You truly have a talent. I felt like getting up at the end and giving your story a slow clap. I am almost speechless...just wow. Haha ok I well stop being werid now, but great story and thank you for the amazing read.
| MyLittleRobin chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Great story! It had a nice beginning and end and I'm sure a lot of people look at their dad like that... Roy and Ed father son is so cute!
| FMAlover32 chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
.god...that was..so...CUTE! I loved the while metaphor thing you had goin on there with a fathers back...because even If this was a fanfic...that idea is as true as they come...
| NillyNarwhal chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
Ed and icky spiders! xD
This was beautifully written and I like how you started it off although I agree with another reviewer that it got a bit wordy. But the rest was perfect. And it's true that Ed 's growing up on Roy's back, even if It's not that obvious at times.
| PeacockBlue chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
I love this pairing and this is really... just... wow.
| Elafacwen chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
I found myself literally going "awwwww!" out loud at the ending.
Very well done!
| paracuties chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Aww...that was really cute. Although Ed did actually get impaled by a pole before in Brotherhood...and he just alchemized away the back, had two chimera-people pull out the front and the part still stuck in him, and then used the bit of alkahestry he learned to close the skin and stop blood loss. So. I don't know, it's your story. But it was good anyway, really good, so nice job! Keep writing!
| castiel in the tardis chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
I just love Parental!Roy! Amazing job :)
| Half Demon Alchemist chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
This was really cute. I especially like the ending.
| TokiNoKusabi chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
I really like this fic and how you interspersed the concept of a father's back throughout. My one issue with this fic is the huge chunks of text at the beginning and a few more times throughout. While the content of those paragraphs is well-written, I feel the ones at the beginning especially get a little wordy, and the format is hard to read, at least for me. If you would just break up the text into smaller segments, it would be a lot easier to read.