Reviews for Forsaken
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Awesome story!
blvdgirl chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Wow. This is an incredible piece, though devastatingly sad to me. Well done.
Black Alya Wolf chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Brilliant, clever, perfectly in character. She's grown up, that's for sure. Very well written; you express ideas and thoughts with incredible beauty. Bittersweet with a touch of cynicism and a dash of acceptance and truth: couldn't ask for more in an angst fic, I suppose.

Keep writing,

Alya
ice-connoisseur chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Beutiful. Bless. I like the wya you wrote this, and the ideas you put into it. Keep it up.

Emma
Sarah chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Sad and sweet, why can't there be more of you?
Eleanor Of Castile chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Gosh...that is beautifully written. I can't think of how else to praise it except to say that it is perfect. I love this line:"With every glance, every whisper of touch, every twining of fingers, every desperate embrace, every living breath and numbered beat of her mortal heart, with every single syllable that fell from her lips she declared her love." Awesome! And I like the idea at the end too, a very suitable farewell to Rose before we move on to the next series. Well done.