|Reviews for What Once was|
| Hellocloser chapter 14 . 4/10/2012
Oho, I would help with the next chapter~
Serious, I hope you continue this. I like it. A lot.
| Wolfsbane-Nin chapter 14 . 10/17/2011
- I present to you the lamest review ever! :D Enjoy!
Awesome story! Update (if you ever decide to) and stuff! :3
Mhh...I just love this story...too bad I cant help you finish it...BYE BYE!
| Pearl of the Orient Seas chapter 14 . 11/10/2010
Maybe you can go to the part where Allen realizes that Karen is his sister? I want a very emotional reunion! (JOKE!) Hmm... maybe I want some emotional chapter but not to much... Did that help or did I go wrong again? But please update and continue this story... I will always read it until the very end! I am expecting the next chapter! Good Luck!
| Sticka-chan chapter 14 . 11/24/2009
Why is this on hiatus ? T_T T_T T_T
it is an amazing story, except that since it hasn't been updated in a while, the events are somewhat backdated and it doean't fit the DGM storyline. Ah well, it doesn't have to anyway, since it's a fic. :D
Please continue real soon, I can't wait to see the next chapter ! XD
by the way, I saw this in an earlier chapter. Lenalee calls Lavi "Lavi", not "Lavi-kun". Either that or I mistook her for someone else, sorry. DX
You've done a grand job on this, go for it !
And yeah, I'd really love to help with the fic for the next chapter. Err, if you don't mind, of course... sumimasen. *sweatdrop
Ja ne~ ! 3
| AkaMizu-chan chapter 14 . 7/7/2008
) this is very good.
i read it all today, and it is very interesting. And what do you need help with in the next chapter?
Anyways, keep up the good work! It is fun to read
| Underworld666 chapter 14 . 5/19/2008
Yay your back and you updated! Woot! Aw pore Lavi. -Hugs Lavi- Good job as always. . I think you should do Linali's past next and save Allen for last.
| Kuro49 chapter 14 . 5/18/2008
WAHH! Your back! -glomps- I was wondering what happened to you... XD How long has it been? at least a few months right? XDD But don't worry, your long update was definitely worth the wait~~ 3 At least all those tests and SATs are over right? Anyways, its nice to have you back and writing!~~
Now the review: Loved it! Rabi's past was so nicely layed out (smile smile) Kai? Nice choice of name XD And his past is believeable! Thats why I love this story, its so believable unlike those other OC fanfics which makes no sense at all ~ bb Rabi suffered a lot... and that little rabbit that keeps on appearing? So symbolic! XDD My favorite part was when Bookman and him meet u I don't know why but it was just so cute XDD WHat more can I say besides: I simply loved it! XD I hope you write more soon~ But no stress ;D
| Underworld666 chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
| nn chapter 13 . 1/9/2008
| 01223 chapter 13 . 1/3/2008
can you pls update
| snowgoddess52 chapter 13 . 11/29/2007
this is awesome you so have to update i cna't wait for th next chapter
| Kuro49 chapter 13 . 8/31/2007
-claps- Loved that chapter, so much kanda XDD. Love his past, so rightly written, it even seems to be possible as for his past... did that make sense at all ~ let me say that again: the past you written for kanda seems really realistic and i would buy it if it comes out from the manga... although i do wish that it was a little boy rather than little sakura... cant stop the BL urges i have XD but sakura is sweet so I like her plenty too Can't wait for more~~ -twirls- loving their pasts chapters
| Coolness chapter 13 . 8/10/2007
Wow I really like you OC there givin a little love for Lavi and yuu-chan. Hm I pick lavi beacuse today is his birthday!
| Underworld666 chapter 13 . 8/8/2007
Nice yet. verry sad chapter. T.T Poor Yuu-chan and Sakura-chan. *Hugs both* I pick Allen!
| mangafreak7793 chapter 13 . 8/6/2007
wow Kanda past is deep but I think you should do Ravi,Rinali,and then Allen