Reviews for Guiding Spirit
Speed Reader chapter 22 . 1/15
Love it! Someone realizing the connection between Garp and Luffy, hilarious!
foxchick1 chapter 22 . 1/12
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Lone Warrior Ersh chapter 22 . 1/11
been a very loooooong time, nice work. bit short through.
Cure Leo AKA AshK1980 chapter 22 . 1/9
Excellent update! Keep up the great work!
trinity.parkour1 chapter 21 . 6/20/2016
I look forward to the next chapter. )
Cure Leo AKA AshK1980 chapter 21 . 3/10/2016
Great work! Once again, I apologize for waiting so long to read and review this latest update! All your stories are great. I just wish I could overcome writer's block with some of my stories. Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
I like the story but please work on your grammar...
airooneb82 chapter 7 . 1/30/2016
cc cn c chu
Taiski chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
Oooh…This is gonna be a riot.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 21 . 1/24/2016
Totally one-sided:)
Guest chapter 21 . 1/24/2016
I vote that they prank him.
Mewaponny chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
You trail off far too much in your writing. The pacing is a little choppy, and the trailing off doesn't help at all. I like the idea of this, but you don't seem to have the ability to write action or describe settings and characters. Read what you wrote out loud. During natural pauses, put commas, unless it's a complete thought, in which case put periods. When cutting yourself of- like this- use a hyphen.
It would probably help you greatly to get some kind of prereader- one of your friends, or maybe your parents.
Ersh Star chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Why did u stop? Keep writing! I like this story , something new.
crimson11116 chapter 20 . 9/12/2014
Please update this
Artamis9 chapter 20 . 5/23/2014
This is one of my favs when will you be updating this one again
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