|Reviews for The Unicorn Prince|
| flaming rose chapter 10 . 1/8/2013
…I liked this chapter so much…
| flaming rose chapter 8 . 1/8/2013
Ohhhhh, I just came to a conclusion(?)! Well, you know how Draco's mother is rumored -I say rumored because I don't know if it's true or not- to have given him the special nickname of dragon? And, how he's supposed to protect Harry or something like that in here? And how it seems he can only where the dragon hide -of course, the unicorn leather, too. But, it replused him remember?- ? Do you see what I see? Hmm?
| flaming rose chapter 7 . 1/8/2013
How was this mysterius(?)boy sobbing on the couch? And why was he crying? And, I absoultely looooved the Malfoy/Potter part! I found it soooo hilarous(?)!
| flaming rose chapter 6 . 1/8/2013
Baaaaaaa! Jeesh, I just sounded like a sheep! (Shivers.) I still can't get to the website! It's really aggarvating(?)! Please post a link to the 'site soon, please! Ciao! For now. Mhahahahahahaha!
| flaming rose chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
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| flaming rose chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
Eppppppp! Oh, and I looked up your website. Several times in fact. But, I couldn't find it! It's sooooooo fusturating! Can you pleeeeaaaassee put a link on your profile or something?! (Looks at athur hopefully.) Pweaase?!
| flaming rose chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
(Laughs ass off.) Ah,ah, poor Harry! (Gasp in between breaths.) Ahhh,hahahahaha! Ahhhh, I don't know why, but that was soooooo funny to me! 'Just was! Now let's get back to the story! Onward, Isay!
| whatev chapter 16 . 12/26/2012
i actually really liked it...in the beginning i thought it was extremely close to the original writing style of HP but as the story continued so did the style... to be true i dont want everything to be rewritten but id like to see how it ends, or at least continues. and yeah sure a lot of things are 'fuzzy' as you called it but if youd continue to write im sure you could clear up some of it. Good Luck!
| fellow author chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
oh how i torn! on the hand as a reader i wold like to see thos version the other as fellow author if you feel it needs to be rewritten then rewrite it. because trust me on this you willnever be happy with your self till you have.
| storm-lighting-wolf-starlight chapter 16 . 12/8/2012
I love it please update
| Belinda chapter 16 . 11/21/2012
This story was very enjoyable. I liked the plot, the creature inheritance was quite original. The pace of the fic was slow though, not much happened even though there were fifteen chapters. Your spelling and grammar were off putting at times. I'd like to see it rewritten. Even if you were only to correct the "your vs you're" mistakes, or the "there vs they're vs their" mistakes. It was kind of vague and confusing at times too. While I understand that it's AU, there were some details regarding the magical creatures that were wrong.
Still, I really enjoyed the story. It has a lot of great potential. If you perhaps look into getting a beta to look over it before you post a chapter I'm sure things would be a lot easier for you.
It's a lovely story, I look forward to whatever you decide to do with it.
| antipodean chapter 16 . 11/17/2012
please rewrite it! I don't want to see it abandoned!
| Infernal Rose chapter 16 . 11/9/2012
I don't care if you finish or rewrite it, just make sure it gets finished please.
| Anime chapter 16 . 11/6/2012
Dont rewrite it its getting good