|Reviews for One Dance|
| Obscure Bird chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Very moving for such a short piece, and beautifully written. Great job!
| ElphabaDaae chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
Wa! That was so sad :( but good :D
| rose123579 chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Beautifully done and a magnificent piece. It did leave tears in my eyes at the very end. But, still wonderfully done and brilliant for being on the sper of the moment. ~Sara Lady of her own world.
| phantom-jedi1 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
Very tragic and sad, yet hauntingly beautiful. Well done.
| x-forbiddenrose-x chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
This is really quite good, especially for a spur-of-the-moment piece (all of mine end up in my computer's recycle bin).
I can't wait to read more of your work.
| mikabronxgirl chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
that was so wonderful. and beautiful. and sad... i cried at the end when the Perisan came to her door.. poor Erik..
it always makes me think that Raoul in Leroux novel was right and that she just couldn't see it until it was too late.
| Virginie chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
So,she danced with a real ghost...Interesting.
Great idea. I loved it.
| LittleLottexoxEriksTrueAngel chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
That was absolutely beautiful! I had tears in my eyes by the end. Beautiful...well done!
| AMT chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Beautiful, very well done!
| Broken-Vow chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Aw! I felt tears start to prick my eyes. No joke. That was so sweet! Poor Erik...(quietly toddles off to cry)