Reviews for The Wait
Sadness-is-Beautiful chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I loved this. You showed exactly how much Jasper loves Alice. Excellent job.
pleasekillmeijustwanttodelete chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Crazy amazing! You did a great job with Jasper, which is hard because no one knows much about him (yet... only a few months til Eclipse!). I loved it!
shobbs chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Good, good. I loved it, loved it, LOVED IT! :]
Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was lovely. Poor Jasper. Gotta love him. ;) This was very well written - great for your first Twilight fanfiction. Keep up the awesome work!
FangedLeaf chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was the best story I've ever read in Jasper's point of view. He is difficult to write about because Stephanie didn't really develop his personality, but you did a great job! Just watch the repetitive phrases.
T chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Amazing. Amazing. Thank you for this lovely piece. Great job, good writer. Thank you.
cnohero chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Very well written, I really felt like I understood Jasper's tumoil
writing bird chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I loved it. I'm usually not so much into the Jasper stories, but this one had its special touch.
gothgirl1011994 chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
WOW! how know that jasper had a sotf side
VintageLyre chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was really good. Poor Jasper, he was so sad and depressed.
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