|Reviews for The Wait|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
that was so good. i love jasper.
| Lins chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I liked it! I read the book so I knew what would happen and I was still worried
| ChazDragon chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
This was really good. I think you portray Jasper's character really well, and everyone else's, too. I feel like we don't know Jasper well enough, and that people don't write about him enough. I'm glad that you did, and glad that you got it exactly right. Write more, please!
| Sadness-is-Beautiful chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I loved this. You showed exactly how much Jasper loves Alice. Excellent job.
| pleasekillmeijustwanttodelete chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Crazy amazing! You did a great job with Jasper, which is hard because no one knows much about him (yet... only a few months til Eclipse!). I loved it!
| shobbs chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Good, good. I loved it, loved it, LOVED IT! :]
| Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was lovely. Poor Jasper. Gotta love him. ;) This was very well written - great for your first Twilight fanfiction. Keep up the awesome work!
| FangedLeaf chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was the best story I've ever read in Jasper's point of view. He is difficult to write about because Stephanie didn't really develop his personality, but you did a great job! Just watch the repetitive phrases.
| T chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Amazing. Amazing. Thank you for this lovely piece. Great job, good writer. Thank you.
| cnohero chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
Very well written, I really felt like I understood Jasper's tumoil
| writing bird chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
I loved it. I'm usually not so much into the Jasper stories, but this one had its special touch.
| gothgirl1011994 chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
WOW! how know that jasper had a sotf side
| VintageLyre chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
That was really good. Poor Jasper, he was so sad and depressed.