|Reviews for Infidelity|
| poor Kaho chapter 1 . 6/6/2007
At least she's the one being cheated on, though either of them cheating on the other is pretty OOC. Since it has an open ending, I'll just assume that telling Kaho was Tomoyo's way of dumping Eriol.
One question, though; why didn't Eriol's Guardians clue Kaho in? They like her well enough, and they have enough integrity to let Kaho know when she's being cheated on.
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Darn...that's SO SAD! Keep writing, though! Awesome job with the storyline and description! :D
| Hiiragizawa Ao'jiro chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
i don't know if you saw the ambiguity in your plot, but its awesome nonetheless. by ambiguity, i mean, anyone can assume or perhaps sense something out of the ordinary at any point. you actually have lots of clues scattered around as the story goes.
i can assume it has two sides; not everything has a sad ending, ne? and mental bias would cause people to think otherwise about the plot
(while reading, i thought of other complications that went pretty well with your story - such as: having reverse roles, and by the line "...the whispered apology at the end of the explanation that had left her shaking..." perhaps an accident, an argument, a pregnancy, or all other things that can happen in an extra-marital affair)
| Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Very nicely written, good job!
| Counterfeiting Shakespeare chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
that was lovely...beautiful ending ;0)
very well written
| Sour Kisses chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
woah. i like. beautifully written. love the... er, sad ending