Reviews for A Series of Annoyances |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this was great :) i enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() This was incredibly written. It's so hard to find good Sakura/Sasuke fics. Thanks for this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love love loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the kind of story I've been craving all week! Thank you! This is beautiful. :) somuchlovefromrenzie17 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look at where your stubbornness lead you Sasuke-kun. kekeke How annoying. XD But admit it Sasuke-kun...being with her is a piece of heaven aiyt? kkkkk |
![]() ![]() You have Sasuke's character down pat. And even though this was mainly from his perspective, it's quite apparent that you have Sakura down to the T, too. Heck, you probably can write any of the Naruto characters. I love how you use subtle actions and the atmosphere to shift the mood and intentions of the characters. I think this was a dab harsher than a lime but the difference is that you didn't dwell on the details. You played more to the sensuality and the feelings afterwards (I love the aftermath btw because THAT is a realistic reaction). I wish you had the motivation to do a multi-chapter because your one-shots are like a multi-chapter in itself... just shorter ]: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god that was so adorable ! Cx Really ! Great job with this , it had a nice mix of fluff & lime which , imo , is a wonderful mix ;D I ''ve read a few or so of SasuSaku fics from Sasuke 's POV , and they are just hilarious xD This one as rather cute & just adorable ! ;3 Thank you so muh for writing this ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! really beautiful written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() -insert squeal- it was so Sasuke that I loved it! I think you actual kept his persona in place, a very great feat indeed Going into my favs! :3 |
![]() ![]() And Kakashi knew it too, the growing sexual tension between his older but still cute students. No wonder he was laughing behind the book of his. Who better recognize the undeniable attraction between them than their porn loving sensei? Its in his orange book, perfectly detailed. He knew the signs so he did what he thought was best. Haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I liked very much! :3 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So very cute and you managed to keep Sasuke in character! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous ending. Great job of keeping them IC. |