Nice job. Sasuke in his denial is funny as all hall, and Cupid Kakashi added a nice touch of irony. And Sakura no longer being a pushover is nice, too. The writing style flows well, fitting it all together. You're good.

(And Sasuke IS annoying, much as I love him!)

i like this story i love how it ended

Oh, that was good! First of all, Sasuke is in character and I know how difficult is to let him so (he's such a complex boy!).

Then, the lime was very very nice... and the plot in general was interesting! I like it :)

lol, that was a very very very good story...keep up the good writing dude! or dudet...lol

so awesome! havent had any good lemons with a story in awhile.

I think I've just died and gone to heaven...

Maa, there are simply no words to describe how amazing this is XD. Times like this remind me exactly WHY I'm a SasuSaku fan .

Sasuke's thinking that she's annoying, her avoiding him, then her calling HIM annoying and him denying it. Not to mention the fantabulous emotions between Sasuke and Sakura that ARE SO OBVIOUSLY THERE! Grar, goddammit, WHY can't this happen in the manga?

Fantastic job! I'm off to go see if you have any more SasuSaku fics XD.

that's really cute.