Reviews for The Key Thing
yckin chapter 10 . 5/9/2013
I love your version of Sakura. She's not ooc, she's a real person and you can even imagine her in canon. But she also chaffes at what others think of her (her landlady) in how to act as a 'female'. However, in her natural element, she doesn't fit into that stereotype ( as evidenced by her putting Neji into a headlock in the cafe *squeal!*). I also think the dynamics of her and Neji's relationship are really well written and, (I think so) quite unusual in alot of fanfiction stories out there. He's not some hyper aggressive alpha male guy and Sakura herself isn;t some shy, submissive blushing AND naive maiden; as evidenced by this sentence: 'Sakura found herself absently thinking of compromising situations and Neji Hyuuga. She didn't feel herself blushing at all.' i also foudn myself laughing at Sakura being pleased because Neji was 'well trained'.
Dancing Peony chapter 10 . 7/2/2012
This is truely been an amazing story. There wasn't a lot of grammar or spelling errors, and for a first fic, it's pretty good.
Please continue this story, because I(we) all want to know what happened next. What would happen with Kiba? Will there be drama? Lol I like drama, just don't make it too extreme, or really long. It gets boring after awhile.
AnimaAmore chapter 10 . 1/11/2012
and now the ball has been set in motion...

Nice work!
AlexJ23 chapter 9 . 3/12/2010
i am actually for Neji x Sakura

Kiba doesn't look to good in the picture :3

hehe, nice story anyways :D
Pie who doesnt love it chapter 10 . 2/4/2009
This is truly an amazing story! I love how you have the story line. cant wait to see whats happened with Hanabi-sama! Please Update ASAP!
Lightmoon-angel chapter 10 . 7/11/2008
okay.. i think i'm going to murder Hanabi...

to kill their romantic mood...

argh.. but somehow i can't blame her, but on the other way i can..

okay, it can't be helped if she's totally down, because of an forced engangement(right?)

but oh the other hand, hell it's GAARA! i would kill for this guy!

your story is really really great! mostly i like how you described neji's unconfortabliness(sp?) and how naruto tried his best to impress hiashi..

and shikamaru! wha! great great!

hope you'll continue soon
michico1243 chapter 10 . 7/9/2008
Update. Please?
Jennitime chapter 10 . 6/30/2008

You have a very active life!


Please Update!
Nami-Lass chapter 10 . 6/26/2008
OMG! i love this story! its so funny, yet so serious! i love it so soo soo soo much! please update! i can't believe how great it is! the grammar is perfect and the words are well chosen! love it so much! please continue!
cutecrazyice chapter 10 . 5/27/2008
Ooh, this is cute. I like the whole Neji-being-a-prude thing. It makes me wonder just what kind of a beast he truly is inside, and how dangerous this beast is when unleashed (wink, wink!). Anyway, nice fic. The Hyuuga clan sure is complicated. Hope you'll write more soon! :)
Innocentenough chapter 10 . 5/27/2008
Awesome story!

I loved the plot line and you write the NejiSakura bits so well

Cant wait for the update :)
CelestialMaidenofSilence chapter 10 . 4/22/2008
I really like the story so far, please update soon. Sorry about all the bad things that happened to you. I hope that things are looking up.
sadbird chapter 10 . 4/20/2008
*gasp* this is a nice story! can't wait for the next chapter
Username-Is-Void chapter 10 . 3/14/2008
Great story! The plot is almost slow-moving in its build up to the bigger moments-like the kiss of this chapter.

I'm sorry to hear of all your troubles since you last updated. At least you're back now, right?
Zetnnik chapter 10 . 2/8/2008
Gah! I got so caught up in the story, I didn't realize that it was the last available chapter! :o(

Lovely story. NejiSaku is just so "romantical"... I just love them strong-silent type guys and the strong-opinionated gals...

Hope you update soon.
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