Reviews for Look My Way
yoaifangirl chapter 5 . 4/1/2014
*nosebleed*
matchynishi chapter 5 . 5/14/2013
Loved this.
Mirage chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
Love your story great pairing, and what he did try to get the attention of Seph, sadly there where not more chapters, hope you write more storys like this!
Ka chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
Aw, fluffy sex, my favorite way for a story to end.
1sunfun chapter 5 . 7/30/2012
Nice and interesting story.
1sunfun
chiakaiyuki chapter 5 . 10/6/2010
cloud is just too cute. :) and the ending, despite the lack of detail in the lemon, was perfect. love your writing style. x
WH chapter 5 . 12/31/2009
That... was perfect. Thank you, for writing this piece.
Superwitch chapter 5 . 7/20/2009
Ack... MORE! MORE!

Dammit - this was written years ago...

*gr *

*walks off *

PS Thanks. :)
crimsondeathhurts chapter 5 . 7/20/2008
Oh my god! That was so cute! It was adorable! Cloud and Sephiroth were so cute together! So cute!
Mitts chapter 5 . 7/13/2008
Yummy, yummy...Yay for Cloud, he got his man, lol.

Was just a little bit disappointed, because I had hoped, with the revelation of the silent watcher in the last chapter, that there was going to be some intrigue or danger to occur in this chapter. But all we got was a mention of who it was, but no explanation as to why he was there.

Oh, and spotted this one error for you...

“Yes, sir,” Cloud whispered almost voicelessly, waiting for the blade to (f)all.

Continued success in your writings...

Mitts
Mitts chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
I can see why this won an award. It's brilliant writing. Congratulations.

Just spotted a few things for you to put right this chapter.

Cloud released a savage, frustrated growl and ripped brutally at his (h)air

After all, what use was a warrior who refused to follow even the simplest of orders?” (There is no need for the speech brackets at the end of that sentence.)

Off to enjoy the rest of the story now...
Ardwynna Morrigu chapter 5 . 7/12/2008
Now that's a perfect little nugget of longing and satisfaction.
sunshine-in-writing chapter 5 . 6/28/2008
Siggh...That was JUST AS GOOD AS 'WIN TO LOSE'! Your characters are just like real people. I love your work so much! Keep writing!

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~Lara
PleiadesWolfe chapter 5 . 4/2/2008
I'm glad everything work out for you Cloud, especially after the general found you crying.
PleiadesWolfe chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
Ah poor Cloud. I don't know how wise it was to run though.
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