|Reviews for At the Bachelor Pad|
| The Scratch Man chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Haha! I like the last part (where Pyro thinks Gambit and Piotr are the crazy ones)
| Sonar chapter 2 . 2/4/2010
Poor Pyro. Great chapter. Very detailed and loved it from start to finish.
| paper.creations chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
Fantastic! Best comedic series I've read for X-Men yet!
-sniffles- I laughed so hard I cried. Goodness, it was great. Chapter two took the cake. 's lisp was just so...marvelous.
Loved it! Re-post soon! I'll send salty peanuts :)
| paper.creations chapter 2 . 9/25/2009
Laughed so hard I cried.
-skips off to the next chapter-
| Chellerbelle chapter 3 . 8/18/2009
This story is hilarious. I was laughing all the way through.
Triple thumbs up (where that third thumb came from I'm not sure).
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
Ya gotta love when guys just talk to one another. Guy talk is always funny, but you made it even funnier. Good work. I think I'll have to go look up squirrel-fishing on YouTube.
| PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
Absoulutely hilarious! You aren't bad at the accents. St. John's could use some fine-tuning, but Remy's is perfecto. You even perfected John's 'gooey toof fingy' voice. That was pure genious by the way.
| PhantomWriter2.0 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
As Pyro stated at the beginning, Pure Genius! I loved it! You put just the write amount of insanity into a surprisingly character-revealing story. I did not suspect this.
| rogue-scholar07 chapter 3 . 11/20/2007
LOL! ROFL! THat's hilarious! Update soon!
| allyg1990 chapter 3 . 11/20/2007
Hilarious! I want to find out more about the squirrel fishing. Clever with the tooth whitening strips. :)
| saucydeviant chapter 2 . 8/14/2007
Aw, see! No matter how insensitive and carefree Gambit can appear, he really does care. Or at least he knows how to fix a situation. Which isn't all that surprising considering with his background he should have more than an adequate grasp on how to get out of sticky situations.
| saucydeviant chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I've decided I have a new favorite...genre? type of fic? Besides Romys I now enjoy humorous adventures of the ex-Acolyte persuasion courtesy of you:) Thank you.
| Valoofle chapter 3 . 5/28/2007
NO! Aw, I'm sad... but I understand. You know, I couldn't become a member on ffnet the first time I heard about it because I didn't have a computer at my house. I wanted to publish and all, but I couldn't since there was no where to type. Twas sad, and that's part of why I had to wait like 4 years to get where I am. Anyhoo, in general, I still love this story, and it will eternally be on my alerts, just in case you get an opportunity to update. Just continue to rock on!
| FaeNocturne chapter 3 . 5/27/2007
Well, this has been quite interesting(and hilarious).I'm sad that you won't be able to update for a while, but I'll try and find something to keep me from constantly nagging people like I do when I'm bored.I didn't ever think of Remy/Gambit using teeth whitening strips, but it's probably , keep up the good work!
| cherryjamontoast chapter 2 . 5/24/2007
I love story. tis going on favorites. Tis funny and you got the hardest accents down to a tee.
Although u seem to be having trouble with Piotor's accent. What I do for broken russian accents is leave out the verbs like 'is'.
"In mother russia, this heat wave. Go swimming. and wear teeny speedos."
or take out other words like it or a.
“Oh. is… short-name?” instead of “Oh. It is a… short-name?”
“No, I wake because John done something to mouth!” instead of “No, I woke you because John has done something to his mouth!”
from what I can understand, they don't use separate words like a the him her alot. Many times it is implied. What I tend to do is speak it and if sound like broken English then, how you say...IS broken English.
I hope help. I give kudos because I no write other accents, what word? good.
Seriously though I hope I helped and perhaps in the future u can give me cajun accent writing 101.