Reviews for Stumbling
mango soda chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
This is so fluffy all i wanna do is say 'aawwww!' i love this playful side of kakasaku. it's kinda hard to find one these days, what with all the angst and deep insecurities and all the other tropes related to this ship. not that i don't like it. but it's refreshing to see the perverted side of kakashi. it just seemed so fresh and entertaining and just the kind of kakashi we all love. i also love your portrayal of sakura, she doesn't sound too mature or too young, and i love how she goes along so well with kakashi, even maintaining a bit of innocent side to her. i kinda got annoyed with the abundance of stuttering but i'm glad it was cleared up in the end. overall, this fic is why i love kakasaku so much 3 and sakura's little demo at the end was too cute for words. :)
phiphi78 chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
so sweet , love this story !
girlftw3333 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Aww! This was really cute, and really sweet! You did a great job on it! Keep up the good work ;)
shadow-saur chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
The sap! The fluff! The over-the-top sweetness!

You rock. This is hilarious. :D
Linnorria chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
wicked lovely.
Ryuui Hatake chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This story is so cute!

Love it!

Keep up the good work,KAKASAKU 4EVAH!

Pls check out mine too.
darkangelthatlovesKakashi chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
I like this story alot but i wish u couldve went nito detail more
HiddenBehindCrimsonEyes chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
The story was cute...

For some reason the line “Because I’ve come to realize whenever I stumble or fall, you’re always there to catch me.” would seem rather cheesy if used any other way...

I love your story...
Mary B. Wolf chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
-has favorited-

I've read this about half a dozen times, and I still love it. Quick-fix stuff:

...he couldn’t stay made at her doesn’t...

'made' to 'mad' (spelling error) and 'doesn't' to 'didn't' would make it flow better, keeping it in tense.

...she loved him-their kiss told him...

'him-their' needs a space between.

...She was absolutely prefect: the sight of her...

'prefect' to 'perfect'

...asked nonplused...

'asked, nonplussed.'

...He didn’t let go if he could help and...

'if he could help it'

He overjoyed

'He was overjoyed'

And so on. Just little things that get on editors' nerves-proofreading will fix it in a snap.

If I've offended you by pointing out all of these, you're more than welcome to do the same to me, because I'm not perfect either.

Keep up the good work, and please, please, PLEASE do not abandon Rising.

delete it chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
aw so CUTE! loved it :)
The Silverdark Knight chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Cute: Five points

Innuendo-laden: Twenty points

Kakashi and Sakura: Fifteen points

Humor: Sixty points

Bonus points for Tsunade's threat: Thirty.

Wow, above and beyond the call of duty.
DotsOnAWall chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
this was funny! luved it!
shelbysaurus chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Stumbling can become quite lovely when there's someone there to catch you :]
aismaiden17 chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
aw man that was really it...good job!
Ayame Shikyo chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
that was so sweet!
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