|Reviews for A Promise To Be Kept|
| Gothic-Hippie13 chapter 19 . 11/4/2013
YESSSSSS! I love this story, I love the pacing, and I especially love the characterization! Most fanfictions I read lack sufficient plot, but yours has a coherent beginning, middle, and end, and it makes the story all the better for it. I have a list of fan fictions that I'm compiling to read out loud on youtube, and perhaps a podcast. It's still in the early development stages, but I would love it if you might grant me permission to read yours. It's just... fantastic. There's no other way to describe it. There are literal tears in my eyes as I'm writing this... IT'S JUST SO PERFECT! GYAHH! And there's a sequel! NYEH! Excuse me for a moment. I need to compose myself. Keep writing!
Peace, love, and discworld.
| Strange Demise chapter 19 . 6/26/2013
-sobbing- ahhh-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! its soo boodifu! DX im kinda bummed its over QQ mehh!
| Strange Demise chapter 18 . 6/26/2013
ahhhhh! -wedding bells playing in my head- w yay! there finally together!
| Strange Demise chapter 9 . 6/26/2013
about this chapter: I just wanna give death a hug right now! the only person who is close to family rejects his company, and a girl he takes interest in seems to stray away from him. ): fate, you are a cruel thing. :I
| Strange Demise chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
finally. FIN-AL-LY! I found a fanfic about death falling in love with a mortal that is nothing like "meet joe black" thank jebus. ima go cry, and come back to continue this story. thought i'd give you a comment on how much I really appreciate you for writing this. im even happier that its based on terry pratchet's disc world. thank-u thank-u thank-u thank-u thank-u! _
| Smozzick chapter 19 . 2/13/2013
Awesome story; never really thought about it before but I love Death as a character, particularly when he's on one of his weird moments.
| obsessivesyndrome chapter 19 . 3/7/2012
Wow. Your storytelling is fantastic, it's very straightforward and simple yet vivid and impactful. I have not read Discworld before but your story made me very interested.
| CarrieVS chapter 19 . 5/24/2010
I really liked the story; a sort of reversal of the story of persephone in the end. Good ending, and that's really hard to do.
Your characters are good! Not many people can get Death right, and your OCs were for the most part very well done. I rather liked Devon, the poor feckless prat.
You obviously have a pretty good idea how to write, but you don't have a lot of skill yet. That is to say, you didn't three years ago when you wrote this. And your grammar makes my OCD hurt.
You have a better grasp of the use of a comma than Carrot, but that isn't saying much. There is an aphostrophe of possession and an aphostrophe of contraction: there is no ahostrophe of plurality. Your approach to homonyms seems to be that any will do.
You clearly have potential.
| Sin Piedad chapter 19 . 4/29/2010
To be honest, I've never read anything in Discworld before(though I've been meaning to for a while now.) I'm glad I read this fic. It's sweetly awkward and I love it. -
| Elin chapter 19 . 12/4/2008
This must be.. certainly have to anyway, be one of the most amazingly greatest stories i've read yet! You have just... just wrote is perfectly. The characters are too well done ("Too" is not bad at all!) and the the the, gah I've always had a hard time trying to explain how i think about things -_-
But I just Love this, truely indeed! I've laughed and... actully... cried ;. And i now got a slightly headache and my eyes ache... but it was more than worth it.. and the clock is late... typical. Well Worth it ALL!
This will be something i'll read later on again, and this will be a part in the book from now. According to me anyway. Death is now married to Elizabeth.
| Morwen Tindomerel chapter 19 . 11/6/2008
There is indeed a certain irony in taking Death until 'Death do you part'. I am detecting echoes of the Persephone myth here. Very well done.
| Morwen Tindomerel chapter 11 . 11/5/2008
"HOW DO I LOOK? Albert stared.
“Like Death, master…’s how you always look.” He said after a long dreadful moment.
Oh I *love* that line. It's no insult to say Death looks like death now is it? ;)
| Morwen Tindomerel chapter 7 . 11/5/2008
“There was a full length mirror, and a wardrobe. She had a look inside, just in case there was a selection of robes, but there was nothing in there except for a few old shoes at the bottom.
Old shoes turn up at the bottom of every wardrobe. If a mermaid had a wardrobe old shoes would turn up at the bottom of it.”
So true. I've got at least a dozen at the bottom of mine.
| SerenDPetty chapter 19 . 11/4/2008
Your story-telling ability is quite enchanting. I have to admit that if it weren't for the commentary (and the fact I was reading it here) I would have been hard pressed not to match you the the MAN himself. I do love reading Terry Pratchet and I adored this story. Please finish "Game with No Rules soon so I can finish reading it too.
By the way, if this had been published, I would happily have added it to my bookshelves! Right beside Thief of Time.
| Dreams of Centaurs chapter 8 . 8/28/2008
I have to ask...who and/or what is the soul cake duck?