Reviews for It was not!
la-hija-de-Dios chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
Aww! This is adorable! :3 I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
Great job with the emotions.
justdaisy chapter 1 . 3/9/2016
This was adorable! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
lol, so sweet, loved it!
RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Wow this was soo good. DA and Carlos are sure good together
RachelWillowK2446 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
...This is the most amazing Carlos/Dorothy Ann story I have ever seen...I ship these two, and I regret nothing...Although you could have added a LITTLE more detail about that "Memory" part, maybe added something about the cake? I love this thing!
Anon chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Wow this was so cute! You really nailed that heart pounding crush-y feeling that you get in high school. Great job! I loved it :)
Neon-Night-Light chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Heh I loved it! Carlos & DA are too adorably stubborn for their own good, getting together is just what they needed :D And you wrote that part so well too! It was so cute how flustered and nervous they were around each other. Anywayz, great fic!
Unknown chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Aww, so sweet.
Account-Deleted-022010 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Loved it! so cute I love this couple 3 Good job!
Sweeter chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
*smiles fluffily* Maybe I'm just feeling overemotional today but that just made me cry! I don't know why! *sighs*
Anise Nalci chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
This is so hilarious. Very nice denial...:)
Suzaku's Rose chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
this story was simply gorgeous. you really kept them in character and the ending was simple and beautiful. great job.
apikale-wahine chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Aw... so sweet. Carlos and DA belong together, no doubt. I like the fact that you have incorporated conflict into the story and still allowed it to be romantic. Carlos and DA are the kind of people who can fight a lot and still love each other, I think. They are a cute couple.
Numbuh 212 chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Aww, so sweet! I love it. Just one random thing: you can't jot down a flight of stairs.

I did have a hard time believing the part at the end where they were, erm, making out. It didn't seem very realistic for them, but maybe I'm just still in the 3rd grade mindset.

Other than that, and maybe a few missing commas, this story was great. It really made me laugh.

Good Job! Keep up the good work.

Numbuh 212
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