Reviews for The Seeds of Time
PSW chapter 8 . 8/10
Yay! Good ending. Enjoyable story, I'm glad there's more to go. :-) Thanks for writing!
PSW chapter 7 . 8/10
That went better than it could have. Good for her, seems like she's got things under control...
PSW chapter 6 . 8/10
Well, I suspect just about everyone's going to be in trouble by the time this is over... :-P
PSW chapter 5 . 8/10
Yup. Here's the something bad, I think. Although to be fair, this bit is as much their fault as Eilian's...
PSW chapter 4 . 8/10
Seems like Eilian and Turgon may have a lot in common... :-P I can only think he's going to have an influence on these kids, and something bad will probably happen...
PSW chapter 3 . 8/10
Hmm...I'm afraid this can only end badly. Little Turgon seems quite the daredevil... :-P
PSW chapter 2 . 8/10
Hmm...I'm guessing because there's actually a problem...

Stupid, pointless way to go, though. Poor guy... :-(
PSW chapter 1 . 8/10
This was a fun chapter, even with the serious overtones. I like little Legolas. :-). You've also, at least In my opinion, done a great job with capturing not only Elves' familiarity with death, but with the very real loss faced when family and friends sail West. I think it's missed sometimes by people (even and especially the movie-makers) - just because Elves don't die naturally definitely doesn't mean they aren't exposed to death on an ongoing basis. In fact, I sometimes laugh at their overall attitude toward Men, given how bloody their own history is... :-P Of course, I know there's a lot more to it than that... Thanks for writing!
lucydod chapter 8 . 10/18/2013
I think all of your stories are going to end up on my favorites list! I absolutely love your writing ;D
citylights319 chapter 8 . 1/3/2013
:D lovely.
Freddie23 chapter 8 . 5/30/2009
really good story. i loved the family dynamic and all the new characters. you portayed the family really well, including the established characters of legolas and thranduil.

i can't wait to read more of your work.
Legolas4me chapter 8 . 5/12/2007
Hello daw!

I just got around to reading the end of your wonderful story! I liked how we were able to get to know Lorellin. It makes the hurt and pain that we have seen the royal family experiences after her death seem more real because we know now who they lost. Now that we know her you just have to write a story about the family reuniting like Legolas did with Turgon! Please! Thanks for sharing this with us!
orlandochick05 chapter 8 . 4/13/2007
I really enjoyed that story. It is nice to see something written from Lorelin's point of view. It is a good opportunity to see the personality of a character that is talked about so much (and I can see why everyone loves her so much! She's pretty hardcore!).
Ilaaris chapter 8 . 4/12/2007
Great chapter and even greater story! I loved it. I hope that you will post another story soon!
Not Here 999 chapter 8 . 4/12/2007
The title is very fitting. I didn't catch the correlation. It makes the story a little more sad. I think this is one of my favorite stories of yours (wait, do I say that on all of them?) I loved being able to learn more about Lorrelin, it is obvious to see why her loss had such a huge impact on her family. I also like the different story telling methods that you had for each of the characters. Thank you so much for sharing this and I am eagerly/patiently awaiting your next story :o)
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