|Reviews for Moichido : One More Time|
| Sora Album chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
how dare you SESSHOMARU! Leave Rin just like that! (It's a good story at all...)
| overninethousand chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
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| midnightsweet chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
| woahhhnelly chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
That was like, such a good story!
| Simonkal of Inuy chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
This was an alright story. It was very out of character for Sesshy, but the story line was good just the same. Also the way you break up Sesshomaru's name, is incorrect, but I guess that could be looked at as a preference. Oh and there are a few things that I'm sure you're not aware of because it's in the Manga, but Sesshy's mom is not dead and Tensaiga can only bring a person back once.
Don't look at this as a flame, becaus it's not, it's just constructive criticism. The way you make it seem as if Sessh is scared of Inu, is well, unnerving, and that is coming from an Inu fan. Perhaps this is a fic that you should have stretched out for a few more chapters, because the end does seem rather rushed.
Anyway, you had near perfect grammar, great use of words and a very interesting storyline. Very interesting indeed!