|Reviews for Deadly Desires|
| Romantic-Faerie chapter 2 . 6/12/2007
This is a really good story and i hope you add more...pls update soon!
| pleasekillmeijustwanttodelete chapter 2 . 4/15/2007
oh come on you have to update!
| origin-of-promise chapter 2 . 3/16/2007
Aw, this is cute. I like how you have it in Edward's point of view. One tip: you're switching back and forth from present tense to past tense. Might want to make sure you don't do that, as it's kind of confusing. But other than that I like this! Update soon.
| teenlee chapter 2 . 3/15/2007
wow they're so mean to him! :'( poor edward
| katben222 chapter 2 . 3/15/2007
hey i like this story! it cool how its from edwards view. update soon!
| Enpowerswan chapter 2 . 3/15/2007
Hahahaha! I like! Update soon.
| Bella Sangue chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
This is good stuff. You should write more of it if you have a plot in mind.
| FMA4EVER chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
i love this story! very nice, but there needs to be longer chapters...also, it is a bit occ; like when edward kisses bella. it's very sweet, but remember that he was very careful with the kisses...he only did it once and awhile so that he wouldn't be tempted to bite her...anyway, i love love this story and it is going on my favz! just make them longer and update soon! thanx!
God Bless You!
| shobbs chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
hehe. I wish I woke up to a greeting like that every morning. :]
| teenlee chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
hahahha :) funny update soon!