This is a really good story and i hope you add more...pls update soon!

oh come on you have to update!

Aw, this is cute. I like how you have it in Edward's point of view. One tip: you're switching back and forth from present tense to past tense. Might want to make sure you don't do that, as it's kind of confusing. But other than that I like this! Update soon.

Dusk

wow they're so mean to him! :'( poor edward

hey i like this story! it cool how its from edwards view. update soon!

Hahahaha! I like! Update soon.

This is good stuff. You should write more of it if you have a plot in mind.

i love this story! very nice, but there needs to be longer chapters...also, it is a bit occ; like when edward kisses bella. it's very sweet, but remember that he was very careful with the kisses...he only did it once and awhile so that he wouldn't be tempted to bite her...anyway, i love love this story and it is going on my favz! just make them longer and update soon! thanx!

in Christ,

~FMA4EVER~

God Bless You!

hehe. I wish I woke up to a greeting like that every morning. :]

hahahha :) funny update soon!