Reviews for Problems With Dean: Road Trip
asdfjkl chapter 15 . 8/17/2009
there better be a sequel waiting for me!
Saffygirl chapter 15 . 8/7/2009
Another awesome story!
Momy2ElmoFriend2 chapter 15 . 3/5/2009
You did an amazing job with this story all 3 parts to it. I loved the part when they were kids. Keep up the great work.
janet1982 chapter 15 . 3/3/2009

will the be more of these storys, i like them:)
janet1982 chapter 6 . 3/3/2009
a cherry impala?

not black one?

awesome story:)
StoryTagger chapter 15 . 2/10/2009
I hate you :)...I can't stop reading one of your stories until I get through the end of it...Your too good a writer...well I'm going to call it quits so I can get some sleep. Catcha on the next waking phase!
StoryTagger chapter 10 . 2/10/2009
Hmm...yeah, I think I still want to punch John...that actually sounds like a good story idea...set it for about when Dean is twenty...twenty-one...and while the three are working on a case just have a random person...Mary's sister? just appear out of no where and deliver a flattening punch to John...

But this story is going really good so far...I do wonder how the story is going to I'm going on to the next chapter!
supernaturalobbsessed chapter 14 . 1/1/2009
Okat completly ignpr my other comment thxs loved the story
supernaturalobbsessed chapter 15 . 1/1/2009
plz update soon and thxs for telling me about the sequal
tellie chapter 15 . 11/19/2008
I read the whole fic after Problems With Dean, and I must say I liked the first one better. I am not saying this sucked, definetly not! I found this one amusing and it was good to read how Dean healed, and I am not talking to that electrocution.

I liked how you wrote the everyday life, but I think you wasted some drama potential here. There was some big things happening, and everyone was very calm - not that it was bad, I just quess some drama would have done well in here.

The first one, Problems With Dean, was just a master piece! Gotta love the POV in first chapters! It was pretty much priceless to see how that version of Dean seemed to his 'parents'! Like many others, I would LOVE if you wrote the prequel of these two, of how Dean's life became like it was at the beginning of Problems With Dean, ans how it affected all around him, from Sam, Mike and other to teachesr and maybe even other kids at school. Ah, that would be DIAMOND!
Sushi Chi chapter 15 . 5/30/2008
Nice. Great story. And right now I think my copier is possesed. For some reason it is acting like it's trying to copy something. And you know what? It's starting to freak me out. But enough about my possesed copier. Great story. Well done.
Princess Misery chapter 15 . 4/20/2008
Loved this!

read both stories in two days and really enjoyed them both.

i love your style of writing and the thought of Dean being quiet and withdrawn once upon a time. wish i could write like you.
Marvin is my Muse chapter 15 . 6/9/2007
I just read Problems With Dean and Problems With Dean: Road Trip. These are such great stories! I'll admit, at first, I was a little leery of reading them because of the whole, being left with Mike and Kate and having another brother, but I'm really glad I did! You really blended the stories well with canon and I LOVE Dean's character in the story - especially this one, when he's all coming out of his shell and Sam's the protective one (role reversal!) They're really great stories and I'd love to read more!

Well done creating this 'verse!


P.S. Your definitely on my author alert!
Brigid Tanner chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Aww, I love Sam getting into bed with Dean and curling around him. Liking the way you've kept the conversations that happened in the ep and added Mikey around them.

OMG! Dean used his dying to get them into the mud-wrestling without paying the cover! That's so perfectly Dean.

"Sic Sam on Mikey. Perfect!" again, perfect Dean way to deflect attention from himself and distract the two people worried about him. Oh, Mikey's not afraid of getting hurt playing ball, he's afraid of doing the hurting. He's way too sweet to keep hunting with Dean and Sam : ) Teared up when Dean was telling Mikey how to look after Sam, and the car. You know Dean's not well if he's not protesting Sam snuggling.

I like that Roy's wondering why a messenger of God would make him cold. I always felt bad for him...he was thinking he was doing good. Got the feeling that if he'd known the truth he'd have killed himself.

Chapter I feel so sorry for John...he did what he thought was best for his sons and they still hate him.

Ch. 11.. Mikey's fake I.D. much needed giggles after all the previous angst. Good balance. OMG! Dean's vetoing the porn channels? yeah, this is an AU! Loved the brothers shoving the beds together to watch the movie. That was sweet, in a very non-chick-flick way, of course.

" “You’re a jackass,” Mikey hissed, pointing an accusing finger down at Dean.

“This is news?” Dean asked from the floor. "


"bickering, irritating people he called family, whom he would not trade for anything"

thanks for the reminder that no matter how much they annoy me from time to time, family is family, and I can always depend on them to back me. Glad that Dean and Sam are willing to talk to John now.

I like to see more in this AU, but you gotta finish the Little Sammy and Sammy Rae stories first! PLEASE! LOL!
Mirriam Q Webster chapter 15 . 4/9/2007
Perfect. I loved it. I like Dean's realization of how important he is and I really like that he is doing something about how Mikey felt left out and lost.

You are brilliant!

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