The story line is well thought out and I enjoyed reading it. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

I read the whole story and it’s very good.

Very good ... I look foward to the sequel.

I enjoyed it very much..

Thanks for your efforts in writing this apart from a few spelling errors for which I had to sometimes think what you were trying to say. I greatly enjoyed this story.

Read it.
In 5 hours.
It was good.

Don't know who complained but I thought it was awesome! Can't wait for more!

Overall, I’d rate this story in the neighborhood of about a 6.5 out of 10, due entirely to contextual spelling errors.

It was like driving fast on a road filled with potholes; a very ruff (or is it rough) ride indeed. And “ruff/rough” confusion wasn’t the only one.

Otherwise, I more or less liked the premise, the plot, and the execution thereof. My biggest piece of advice is to get a beta if you intend to keep writing. They should be able to iron out the contextual errors.

Oh, and for the idiots posting nasty crap about how you’re doing it wrong...well...FRACK THEM!

(but seriously, Wraith vessels with shields? Of everything you did, that one actually spun me around.

I JUST found this story - what, 11 years after you posted? Enjoyed it tremendously. Handling all the different personalities, plot twists, battle scenes - this is a great work. Thank you for your efforts!

I think the premise is interesting, but I've already got a few major issues with what I'm reading.

First, the cylons and colonials have a near obsessive hate for one another. There would be no talking, not this easy at least.

Second, the SGA functions under UN rules including the Geneva Convention. Torture is absolutely abhorrent to the 'Atlantians', and when something similar happened with Sheppad and the Genii, Atlantis went to war. Again, there would need to be a much longer cool-down period before talks started.

It feels like way too many details are being left out, and that things are progressing much too fast.

Really enjoyed this story. Only discovered it yesterday. Thank you for posting.

Wow, you seem to attract some really garbage reviews. I just can't understand the mindset of someone who barges in and argues details of the specs of fictional ships and weaponry, especially when the Stargate series itself is already pretty inconsistent with the capabilities of their technology. (Asgard technology is better than ancient technology, as shown by Asgard upgraded ships destroying wraith ships easily, but Ori ships based on similar principles handily beat the Asgard?)

Just like in Stargate, you write the capabilities of the ships in line with the rules of drama and not against some arbitrary metric for how powerful a fictional ship must be. It's frustrating to see otherwise good writing and pacing reviewed by the comment section from a Death Battle Youtube video. Anyways, good job and I enjoyed this one a lot.

Even with shields...an O'neill class ship should CRUSH a hive in less than 5 shots. With a ZPM... a BC-304 is basically invincible next to a hive.

2 things...no way the Asgard named a ship after McKay...he hasn't done anything to deserve it. Also...yes they do have a brig.

I just found this story a few days ago. It was a good read.