|Reviews for A Walk in the Sunlight|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
So Kaoru's disease is like the one that guy from Ouran High School Host Club has?
Love the story so far! XD
| FatalStarshine chapter 22 . 6/4/2013
Loved the story! Made me tear up at the end :]
| anonymouswritermm chapter 22 . 2/10/2013
Simply wonderful. Grammar and spelling were nearly impeccable, which I think can really make or break a story. Descriptions were in-depth, and the story line was captivating. I am actually not usually a fan of vampire stories, but since I am a nurse and lover of genetics the summary drew me in since I had heard about this disease before - and I absolutely loved this story. This is meant in a totally non-critical way, but you don't use CT scans to visualize nerves...it's really just gives a stronger image than an X-ray and you actually have to keep them in separate rooms and wear lead shields on around them. Usually the most detailed images are from MRI's..and then there are nerve conduction tests...anyway I digress. This story was fantastic. You are talented, and I am pleased that you really kept through with this until the end, it's hard to do. Great, great job!
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 15 . 2/9/2013
I'm really impressed with all the layers you have around! Usually most stories are quite linear; yet, your story is quite unpredictable and has some twists and turns that really makes me wonder what will come next!
I love the way how you are bringing familiar characters little by little (Now was Misao! yeaaaaaaah!) and the way that the story unfolds: since the beginning we had a general idea of Kenshin's past but you continue adding more and more information.
I confess that when I read the story's summary I jump to the conclusion that Kaoru was sick, Kenshin would fall for her and turn her into a vampire, but the story keeps escalating and became so much more than that!
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
:D Megumi is here to! And she wants to beat Sano! This gets bet and better!
I confess I'm surprised that story stills has so many unread chapters... Kaoru's in the hospital, Megumi was found, Iizuka is already arrested... It doesn't seem to have so much fuel to go so long! Hmm, I'm just curious..
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 13 . 2/9/2013
:( It was sad...
At least another old friend of us make an appearance: Aoshi, as cold as ever!
Did they really captured Iizuka? Seemed to easy to me...
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 12 . 2/9/2013
I was hoping that would beg to Kenshin change Kaoru...
Oh, this chapter was so... desperate! Silly Kaoru, run out of house like that! She would hardly be able to rescue Sampson if she didn't took any protection!
Poor Sampson :( :( :( I'm really sad... He will be missed throughout the rest of the story...
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 11 . 2/9/2013
And Kaoru finally met Sano. Nice! Loved it the part when Kenshin "tries" to prevent Sano to meet her, and later when they argue about their "sibling" relation!
Yet, reality strikes in... :( First, Kaoru's disease, then Iizuka :(
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 10 . 2/9/2013
:D I really love Sano, he is such a funny character! I loved the part where he punches Kenshin for having tried to kill him! Poor Kenshin, must have stay sore for a couple days! And Hiko was also great! And also, Kenshin interacting with Sampson is overly cute!
Yet, this thing about Kaoru is just sad :( Such an awful diseases :(
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 9 . 2/9/2013
I guess I was not expecting Kaoru's father to be so overly protective... but I guess that, given the circumstances it went well enough ;) Kaoru's mom, on the other hand, is really sweet :)
OMG OMG OMG Hiko is here! :D
What do you mean that the fun begins "only" here? What are you "cooking" next? Can't wait to find out!
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 8 . 2/9/2013
What a way to know the truth about her sickness :(
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 7 . 2/9/2013
Ohhhh, such a sweet chapter! I grinned when Kaoru caught Kenshin before he was able to sneak upon her, this time! And is so cute to see them sparring!
Can't wait for him to meet her parents! It's almost like they are already a couple ;)
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Ahah! Kenshin finally convinced Kaoru to spend some time with him! I love the way he always ask "you will come back?" :)
I'm fascinating about the little details you throw around the story, like the fact that the tea set Kaoru was admiring early on Kenshin's living room was, in fact, painted by Tomoe!
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
I confess I was really looking forward for Kaoru to go to Kenshin's house to return his umbrella (that was a strike of genius)! Yet, the way the story unfolded was so sweet, the way Kenshin came in her rescue at the right moment... I was really concerned about her!
Yet, there was a little detail that didn't quite rang right... If Kenshin has a car (he had packed it, when he decided to move), why didn't he used it to go look for her?
| Yasmin Kamiya chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
In fact, Kenshin does make an weird vampire... If I was in Kaoru's position I wouldn't believe either! Can't wait to read the rest of the story :P