Reviews for The Ill Effect
Abbstarz chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
My Family is my favourite comedy show of all time. It's brilliantly written and all the characters are extremely enteraining in their own way and you've captured them marvelously.

A fantastic one shot that's done justice to this great show.

Kudos to you. 3

Abbey
sova enari chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
My Family is the best :D

Good story!
WritingJunkie chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Would have maybe been better if it had been a little longer but it's still good ]
AngelEyes87 chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I think you could have added a lot more detail in this and yeah, it was funny xD And another thing, you should be careful of spelling errors as I spotted a few. Also, try to establish the plot too.
Aggie Escott chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Nice start (it is just start, isn't it?)

do keep going, i need to know what the job is!

Great chappy

Aggie x
jackiez32 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
This is good so keep going!
MissHaunted-MoonLight chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
Hello!

Cute start! Definately seems like the Harpers to me! _

Just one thing, you should probably watch out for your tenses - with this, you've started in the past tense then moved into the present. It's only a minor thing, but keeping everything in the same tense helps the story to flow better as a whole.

Still, I love the characterisation you've created - they all seem to be exactly as they're portrayed in the show, so brilliant work with that!

Gonna update? You probably should! I'd read on! :)

Blessed Be!

Peanut x X x
XxBeautyFairytaleOfJorrieXx chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
AW good start I liked it, I love my family

X Kellyx