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Harry is a f**king moRon. He told people that have no mental shields about secret training and breaking laws. They hadn't contacted him in two f**king summers and he spills his newest secret like it's f**king water from a spout!
There's no such thing as distance restrictions on international portkeys like that. People couldn't cross the Atlantic or Pacific if there was, you moRon! Let's drown in the middle of the ocean for 45 minutes while we wait for the next part! HAHAHAHA!
Harry the moRon didn't take anything with him. What a moRon.

Nah man, this story was going sooooo good! like really good. And then you fuck it uo with some brother sister soul bond bullshit. It simply ruins every fucking piece of character development, and every piece going forward. Its a shitty easy was out of actually writing about there relationship developing. Thanks for ruining a perfectly good story for nothing.

Really? Some fucking weird ass bond witb maya. couldn't help yourself could you. Couldn't just let him actually develop feelings himself because you don't know how to write it maybe? So you had to force it. I hate almost all forced bonds. Seems to be the easy way out for people.

Absolutely love this so far.

Okay, can I just say that this story is absolutely fucking amazing! Seriously, what an amazing tale and I love the progression and character development. As well as the length of the chapters. I seriously can't wait for more!

Can't wait till you update this story and give it some more attention.
Have a great weekend and coming week.

Very good story enjoyed reading thank you

Love the story, wish it was longer than it is.
Please update

Please update and continue this story.
Love to see it get some attention and see it to completion.

just read this would love to read more its really good

Very good story, please update it and give it a proper ending when the time comes.
Have a good week.

Fantastic story, please update and complete it as soon as you can.
Love to see this story updated and finished.
Have a great week.

Really enjoy this fantastic story, hope more chapters will soon be posted.
Have a great week.

Hope that this story will be continued, love to see it finished soon.
Have a great week.