|Reviews for If Only|
| Hetomi chapter 31 . 11/23
You are right it was evil, but I have the feeling it's only the beginning
| pickles chapter 18 . 10/29
I read this story a looong time ago. Started reading it again since its been so lomg and i forgot. Then i read the scene with naruto and his mom dancing. Now ive read hundreds of stories on this site, but that scene never strayed from my imagination. Like i didnt realize ive read this already until ch. 18 and then im like 'oh shit, this is THAT story?' So for the fact that something you wrote stuck in my mind for possibly years, i gotta say good job. Ill probably go read all your other stories after this lol
| Shade chapter 31 . 9/11
uh it needs to be updated... Soon... Like, right now...
| Rain of the Forest chapter 31 . 5/25
YOU ARE FUCKING CRUEL YOU KNOW THAT!
Lavi: *smiles in a I'm-going-to-leave-before-I-get-killed way* Alright, now I'm going to hide under my iron couch of defense while the author runs around avoiding my evil, psychotic, insane, maniac of a friend... *crawls under couch*
| Rain of the Forest chapter 14 . 5/3
Um, I'm pretty sure Naruto's father's name is MINATO! Not Arashi... since when did you change the names?
Lavi: Let's not forget how you've been getting agitated whenever you see Naruto's mother's name... which is totally incorrect...
I've been trying to keep quiet about that for A REASON!
| Rain of the Forest chapter 11 . 5/3
Did you seriously turn Kurama into a little fox?!
| Woffie chapter 31 . 4/28
Such a sad ending,,, Poor Naru...
| Galeiam chapter 1 . 4/15
Starting it off with an AU and two INO characters...huh maybe it'll be good.
| long live marshmallows chapter 14 . 4/12
Who is Arashi?
| Lorne Estel chapter 14 . 4/3
You missed changing Arashi to Minato in this chapter. Very good story so far I am really enjoying it.
| CMVreud chapter 31 . 2/18
I just now realised that it's like a counterpart-worlds version of the Moon-eye plan of the Uchihahaha.
| CMVreud chapter 19 . 2/18
Ouch, now that's a anime-worthy plot.
| CMVreud chapter 13 . 2/18
Now that's an awesome cliffhanger.
I wished writers would use mid-sentence-stoppers more often.
| CMVreud chapter 12 . 2/18
I can't but think they all, especially Naruto, that therewas something fishy with his head he didn't quite catch. And what's with the blood sample.
| CMVreud chapter 11 . 2/18
You really know how to write a story that binds one, do ya'?