Reviews for If Only
Wfest chapter 31 . 1/18
Great story! Very well written. Suspense, action, emotions, all well balanced. On to the sequel!
fadhielmq.fb chapter 14 . 12/25/2017
great story.. but please do some adjusment here.. like the name of the forth hokage..
in previous chapters his name is minato, but in this chapter his name is arashi
libraryrockerr chapter 19 . 9/9/2017
poor Naruto ;_; ;_; ;_;
Guest chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
I love that Robin Hood referance
Laialy chapter 11 . 6/17/2017
Omg finally answers from kyuubi hopefully
jasmineharuno chapter 31 . 6/14/2017
this has got to be the saddest fic i've ever read
Jion chapter 31 . 11/30/2016
You bastard. You made me feel things. I was legitimately crying near the end. When I first saw this story, I gave up at the second chapter. I admit, I thought that it was gonna be a stupid family cliché, but damn, was I dead wrong. You are an extremely talented writer, especially with your exemplary world building and the development of the original characters. You made me care about them. Again, how dare you. The plot was brilliantly twisted in ways that my tiny mind could never even dream of. In short, THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING THING IN THE HISTORY OF AMAZING THINGS. YOU CRUSHED MY HEART AND STOMPED ON THE PIECES, SET THEM ON FIRE WITH A FIRE JUTSU, FED THE ASHES TO A LION, THE LION DECOMPOSED INTO THE GROUND, A GAZELLE ATE THE GRASS ON THE GROUND, AND THE GAZELLE HAD A BABY, AND THE BABY GOT EATEN BY A GIANT PINEAPPLE FROM HELL. ...that's how you made me feel. So thank you. I'm going to read the sequel now. I swear to Ramen Gods, if that makes me feel HALF as much as this, I will find you. And kill you. With hugs. Wishing you the best,
Guest chapter 7 . 11/17/2016
im done... so annoyingly loud and dumb..
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
god! your naruto version is dumb as fuck!
desolatecookie chapter 31 . 11/12/2016
This is like one of the best stories I've ever read. The ending nearly made me cry. I can't wait for more of your fanfictions and the sequel.
Narutofanninja2 chapter 2 . 8/31/2016
Haven't read this in 4ever
Xcherokee chapter 16 . 7/25/2016
I'm so used to minato having complete control, I don't understand why he would just let his son boo's him around like that and punch him. Even bough naruto is right, I could never see minato just allowing naruto to do all that. Also he gives naruto so much freedom.
Xcherokee chapter 15 . 7/25/2016
NOOOOOO why did you make my baby Naruto so tall?! Naruto is short okay and minato is definitely taller than 5'10.
Xcherokee chapter 14 . 7/25/2016
Naruto is honestly so cute. Always trying to grab Hinatas hand aw he's like a hyperactive little puppy dog.
Xcherokee chapter 6 . 7/24/2016
This world is so bad ;( everybody but Naruto has a horrible life. I love the story so far! I always wanted naruto have an older slibling though not younger... Also I wished naruto was a little younger in this like 12 or so but oh well. I never gave this fanfic a chance before but now I'm glad I did.
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