|Reviews for If Only|
| OrangeStar802 chapter 31 . 4/17
I was seriously about to give up on this story when I read the first few confusing and weirdly written chapters with the sudden Merea and siblings stuff but it was really good that I didn't coz if I had I would've missed the progress that has become of your writing and the thicker plot which this story lies on. It was really good. Going to your sequel now.
| Wind Dragon Master chapter 31 . 4/9
I LOVE IT MAN! (Or Woman). This is one of the best I have ever read! Or the best I have ever read! Continue making stories like these.
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/15
the hell? if she could do the eye thing why did everyone make a big deal about it when he activated it when they were trying to get in? couldn't she just lead them in?
| kikise chapter 1 . 3/6
I have read a lot of fanfics about naruto, but yours is the best I have the pleasure of having read. You did an splendid job. I love it!
I'm currently reading "Rescue me"
I don't have a lot time now but later I will leave my reviw on the secuel too.
| Riccardo Silviano chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Did I just sense a NaruSasu over here? *Whistles* I just can't resist saying it - pointing it out even xD
| maconi chapter 14 . 10/27/2013
im confused on why you changed the fourths name from the manga name to his fanfiction name in this chapter
| CrazyScythe chapter 21 . 9/29/2013
What the hell? How do you access your own mind like that without using any Yamanaka jutsus?
| Twitchy chapter 14 . 9/22/2013
I could practically feel myself twitching as I read the name ARASHI. I mean, seriously, you got the name right in the previous chapters, why get it wrong now?
But it was a good chapter, I just get ticked when the character's names get messed up, I already ignored the fact that you changed kushina's name so... Yeah.
| DevilGene chapter 31 . 9/12/2013
made me cry... Naruto is truly an angel...selfless
| Sympathy for the Lost Love chapter 19 . 9/2/2013
night at the museam
| Sympathy for the Lost Love chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
im curious, when a world that's the same but people are changed, it was usualy one major event.
in a naruto movie, sakura's dad had saved the village instad and the people were opposites
what's with this world?
| deb chapter 14 . 8/31/2013
first you call minato is naruto dad who is arashi? but it's good story
| saashi samy chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
| mutecebu chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
"My teeth or my—"
I laughed out loud there
| mutecebu chapter 11 . 8/11/2013
DUM dum duuuuummmmm...
I enjoyed this chapter. I like the direction you're taking the story, where Naruto falls in love with the family. Also, I like that the Kyuubi is putting in an appearance.