Reviews for If Only
Ninjazzz chapter 14 . 7/14
Arashi? Mrs Rajiri? What?
WolfAndBookLover chapter 31 . 7/10
Guest chapter 31 . 7/1
Please continue Your story is really good! I look forward to reading more
X-Heiz chapter 3 . 7/1
I stared at the last goddamn two words like a CCTV camera. Whhyy?
PoisonCupcake101 chapter 26 . 3/31
Wow is Maera on her period or what, because she overreacted with the store clerk way too much, why would she get angry with the guy not sending reinforcements, I mean obviously you wouldn't, you bring them in yourself, you catch them you bring them sort of thing.
Wfest chapter 31 . 1/18
Great story! Very well written. Suspense, action, emotions, all well balanced. On to the sequel!
fadhielmq.fb chapter 14 . 12/25/2017
great story.. but please do some adjusment here.. like the name of the forth hokage..
in previous chapters his name is minato, but in this chapter his name is arashi
libraryrockerr chapter 19 . 9/9/2017
poor Naruto ;_; ;_; ;_;
Guest chapter 10 . 7/19/2017
I love that Robin Hood referance
Laialy chapter 11 . 6/17/2017
Omg finally answers from kyuubi hopefully
jasmineharuno chapter 31 . 6/14/2017
this has got to be the saddest fic i've ever read
Jion chapter 31 . 11/30/2016
You bastard. You made me feel things. I was legitimately crying near the end. When I first saw this story, I gave up at the second chapter. I admit, I thought that it was gonna be a stupid family cliché, but damn, was I dead wrong. You are an extremely talented writer, especially with your exemplary world building and the development of the original characters. You made me care about them. Again, how dare you. The plot was brilliantly twisted in ways that my tiny mind could never even dream of. In short, THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING THING IN THE HISTORY OF AMAZING THINGS. YOU CRUSHED MY HEART AND STOMPED ON THE PIECES, SET THEM ON FIRE WITH A FIRE JUTSU, FED THE ASHES TO A LION, THE LION DECOMPOSED INTO THE GROUND, A GAZELLE ATE THE GRASS ON THE GROUND, AND THE GAZELLE HAD A BABY, AND THE BABY GOT EATEN BY A GIANT PINEAPPLE FROM HELL. ...that's how you made me feel. So thank you. I'm going to read the sequel now. I swear to Ramen Gods, if that makes me feel HALF as much as this, I will find you. And kill you. With hugs. Wishing you the best,
Guest chapter 7 . 11/17/2016
im done... so annoyingly loud and dumb..
Guest chapter 5 . 11/17/2016
god! your naruto version is dumb as fuck!
desolatecookie chapter 31 . 11/12/2016
This is like one of the best stories I've ever read. The ending nearly made me cry. I can't wait for more of your fanfictions and the sequel.
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