|Reviews for Don't Hesitate|
| hakku23 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
:Q drooooool XD that was smexy ;)
| RANDOMNATIONS chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
that was good... first shot at yaoi? better than mine. It was really bad. consider yourself gifted.
| TaiLey6 chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
(sniffs) So beautiful.
Robert: Emi i don't hear you doingyour coursework.
Me: Oh * Rob. Brothers -.-'
Yes i am famous for not doing my coursework untill the last minuet so...
Rob: Emi do your COURSEWORK!
Me: All right all right. Jeez.
Good story make a sequal. Please?
| xCrystalized chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Yay for straight forwardness. xD
| stardragon12 chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
cute but short. Not much depth but you know what you want to happen so that's a start. Try more explaining or something to create a bit of depth. Nice job though
| deidara-kupkake chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
XD! SUPER KAWEII SASUKE AND DEIDARA ARE AN AWESOME COUPLE. YAY FOR YAOI
| Kinoko chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if there is more of a characterization, because they both seem to have the same character. (well really Sasuke doesn't have his original character).
It's also nice, because writting is so special, to connect to the reader's 5 senses. Your story has good basic outline, but it lacks drawing the reader in here and there.
Apart from that congradulations! Good luck on your DeiSasu fanfics in the future! (looking forward to them
| Sphinxgal1 chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
i like the pairing.
i think u should write more of it
| Maeka chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
hmm,, i used to think deidara was a girl..
but then i found out he's guy..
hmm.. not really a yaoi expert..
But i like it..
it was amusing..
Sasuke and deidara teasing each other..
| jazzie chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
omg, first sasu dei i've ever read _ its cool dude keepitup!
| rain07 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
I like it! Very nice Kitsu-chan! _ I really liek the yaoi-ness, and the plot. Very amusing! Keep going at it! I want more yaoi! xD