|Reviews for Don't Hesitate|
| hakku23 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
:Q drooooool XD that was smexy ;)
| RANDOMNATIONS chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
that was good... first shot at yaoi? better than mine. It was really bad. consider yourself gifted.
| TaiLey6 chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
(sniffs) So beautiful.
Robert: Emi i don't hear you doingyour coursework.
Me: Oh * Rob. Brothers -.-'
Yes i am famous for not doing my coursework untill the last minuet so...
Rob: Emi do your COURSEWORK!
Me: All right all right. Jeez.
Good story make a sequal. Please?
| xCrystalized chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Yay for straight forwardness. xD
| stardragon12 chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
cute but short. Not much depth but you know what you want to happen so that's a start. Try more explaining or something to create a bit of depth. Nice job though
| deidara-kupkake chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
XD! SUPER KAWEII SASUKE AND DEIDARA ARE AN AWESOME COUPLE. YAY FOR YAOI
| Kinoko chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if there is more of a characterization, because they both seem to have the same character. (well really Sasuke doesn't have his original character).
It's also nice, because writting is so special, to connect to the reader's 5 senses. Your story has good basic outline, but it lacks drawing the reader in here and there.
Apart from that congradulations! Good luck on your DeiSasu fanfics in the future~! (looking forward to them
| Sphinxgal1 chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
i like the pairing.
i think u should write more of it
| Maeka chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
hmm,, i used to think deidara was a girl..
but then i found out he's guy..
hmm.. not really a yaoi expert..
But i like it..
it was amusing..
Sasuke and deidara teasing each other..
| jazzie chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
omg, first sasu dei i've ever read _ its cool dude keepitup!
| rain07 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
I like it! Very nice Kitsu-chan! _ I really liek the yaoi-ness, and the plot. Very amusing! Keep going at it! I want more yaoi! xD