Reviews for Don't Hesitate
hakku23 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
:Q drooooool XD that was smexy ;)
RANDOMNATIONS chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
that was good... first shot at yaoi? better than mine. It was really bad. consider yourself gifted.
TaiLey6 chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
(sniffs) So beautiful.

Robert: Emi i don't hear you doingyour coursework.

Me: Oh * Rob. Brothers -.-'

Yes i am famous for not doing my coursework untill the last minuet so...

Rob: Emi do your COURSEWORK!

Me: All right all right. Jeez.

Good story make a sequal. Please?

xCrystalized chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
Yay for straight forwardness. xD
stardragon12 chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
cute but short. Not much depth but you know what you want to happen so that's a start. Try more explaining or something to create a bit of depth. Nice job though
deidara-kupkake chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
Kinoko chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
It's pretty good, but I think it could be better if there is more of a characterization, because they both seem to have the same character. (well really Sasuke doesn't have his original character).

It's also nice, because writting is so special, to connect to the reader's 5 senses. Your story has good basic outline, but it lacks drawing the reader in here and there.

Apart from that congradulations! Good luck on your DeiSasu fanfics in the future~! (looking forward to them
Sphinxgal1 chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
great fic

i like the pairing.

i think u should write more of it
Maeka chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
hmm,, i used to think deidara was a girl..

but then i found out he's guy..

uhh,, yeah..


hmm.. not really a yaoi expert..

But i like it..

it was amusing..

Sasuke and deidara teasing each other..

jazzie chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
omg, first sasu dei i've ever read _ its cool dude keepitup!
rain07 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
I like it! Very nice Kitsu-chan! _ I really liek the yaoi-ness, and the plot. Very amusing! Keep going at it! I want more yaoi! xD