|Reviews for Shinigami no Sonzai|
| JuMiKu chapter 2 . 5/22/2007
L is actually older than Raito. If I'm not mistaken, it's 7 years.
Anyway, I'd like to see where you are going to take this.
| JuMiKu chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Almost all your sentence begin with "he". Try to use different structures and the reading of your story will be more pleasant. You should also try to reduce the number of mistakes you make. In other words I suggest getting a good beta.
The plot itself is interesting though.
| Crosser chapter 2 . 3/26/2007
Not bad, not bad at all! This is a fine way of showing a alternate universe, I could see this happening if Light never used the death note. I can hardly wait till the future chapters.
| asdf42 chapter 2 . 3/20/2007
i like much your fic, is creative and interesting in special ryuku and light. but L is 24 age not 17 because he was born in 09-31-1979.
congratulation and continue
| asdf42 chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
i speak spanish, but fic is interesting and the pairing lightXmisa is my favorite... congratulation and continues