Reviews for Will You Let My Lights Languish
amandab821 chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
Aw. That's nice.
dark-hearted rose chapter 1 . 3/26/2007

loved it, i really did. the rhythm was interesting, inconsistent, and that ::usually:: bugs me, but it was appropriate for the tone and subject matter, not to mention her thought processes throughout the poem. I especially liked how the whole thing was broken up into smaller parts by the really short lines throughout...a wonderful job at tonal shift and drawing the attention of the reader back in.

well done!

warm regards,

dark-hearted rose
Luckii.jinx chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Ahh, spine tingling. That's always a extremely good indication of excellent writing. Loved it!

Esp. the last was quite haunting.

flamethrowerqueen chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
The rhythm is a bit weird, true, but overall, it is good. The style is enjoyable.