Reviews for Living Among Leaves
The Mother Rose chapter 6 . 2/4/2008
Sakura got EXACTLY what she deserved. Naruto made it perfectly clear she was not welcome at that point in time but like the rude spoiled girl she is she burst in anyway. But I do feel sorry for Hinata who will now have to deal with Sakura's jealousy. Here's hoping Naruto can figure out a way to spike Sakura's guns while at the same time protecting Hinata's reputation, though him being the clueless idiot he is he probably won't even realize he needs to until it is too late.

Supersleuth94 chapter 62 . 1/24/2008
YES! is my answer to ur question and again YES DAMNIT!
Supersleuth94 chapter 51 . 1/23/2008
zander666 chapter 19 . 1/23/2008
someone probably already told you, but i'll do i t anyway.

nee-san stands for older sister, for older brother it would be nii-san.

as for the fic itself, i'm to amazed to say how great it is :P
zander666 chapter 4 . 1/22/2008
Apart form what you've writen at the end of the chapter (author notes) I think you did a really good job with the lemon. It wasn't supposed to be a description of porn movie but of two people giving pleasure to each other for the first time. Any way GOOD JOB.


Sorry for eventual language mistakes, english is my second language :P
PyxisCetus chapter 67 . 1/6/2008
WOW i loved this story it was mind blowing. the mix of action,drama,and romance was incredible; you tied them in well.
tailedfox225 chapter 67 . 1/2/2008
loved the story!

funny quote "freaking perverts" XD
Funk.Endgame.Trilogy.Armagedon chapter 8 . 1/2/2008
this is good but its hard to enjoy when this comes up Error. An exception error has occurred while processing your the problem persists, please alert site admin via errors are logged for administrative and security purposes. if yu know how to fix thisd do tell
sarahhasley chapter 18 . 12/26/2007
*blush* ok it was better than the last one. it was akward but kinda funny how the avenger finally found his soft side for girls.
krisi07 chapter 67 . 12/26/2007
This story was freaking awesome. I wish you would make a sequel to it. thank you so much for writing this amazingly awesome story.
sarahhasley chapter 14 . 12/26/2007
woo hinata-sama! that was awsome but hiashi is really going to be a pain in the ass after this. it will get interesting.
sarahhasley chapter 13 . 12/26/2007
wow at first i wanted to cry because naruto couldn't forfill his dream but now i admire that fox. barely but i do. it will be awsome that he can be a ninja still. thank god. thanks for writing this chapter.
sarahhasley chapter 3 . 12/25/2007
ok this is weird but interesting.
sarahhasley chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
hey this is an awsome chapter. I wish that i was this good at writing. It was alittle boring but it should get better later right. well anyway can't wait to see the rest.
YinYangTwin1 chapter 67 . 12/20/2007
Wow finally finished the story and it was great. But i have to say, things were a bit sad what with shikamaru losing his legs and akamaru and neji losing their lives and all. I settled on the fact that akamaru died and I got over the fact that shika lost his legs but why NEJI. I think that was a little too much... like what happened to tenten after that? Well overall it was a fine story indeed.
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